This is so great. I wish you would write more LOCI fictions.

This is one of the best BA fics I read. Good job!

Very different and I very much enjoyed it. I like your prose and I like these brief little insights. Very nice job!

Sorry it took me awhile to get over here and read, but...wow! Very good! I like it :)

This is a beautifully, beautifully written set of short scenes. I loved the language and the presentation, and dearly loved the imagery. There were so many bits and pieces that I loved, it'd take a whole other review just to list them all.

Beautiful.

Then it is my sincerest wish that more CI episodes would find you in the future. Perhaps we'll get more of these excellent stories as a side effect.

This is absolutely beautiful, and is definitely going on my favorites list. Just wonderful. You capture the magic between Bobby and Alex so perfectly, all that they don't say to each other. Nice, nice job. Hope to see more from you in this section.

You've only seen five episodes? May you watch them all and keep writing CI. This was lovely.

Only five episodes? Wow! This was wonderful. I can't wait to see what you write when you have watched more.

LOVE IT!!

Wow.. just wow. That was a really great story.

That was soo cool, i love it! great job!

This is the most in-character story I've ever read. Keep watching and keep writing!

o, wow. WOW. that was--quality. really, really, good. not amateur writing, like most fanfic. oh, wow. thank you. written anything else, in other fandoms maybe?

WAY GOOD! This was interesting and very, very well written. Great job.