I like the song :) I actually sang it out loud how, I thought it should have sounded, while I read it. My singings pretty crappy, but I can totally imagine Yugis beautiful voice singing it! .

that was a grat song i liked it

Holy...shit...I LOVED THAT SONG YOU MADE!It was lovely!Too bad you can't record yourself singing it(or someone else) with someone playing the guitar.I would have SO favorited it and downloaded it :D...now i kinda feel like learning the lyrics(well studying them alot) then sing it with my dad or uncle billy playing the guitar for it!(most likely my uncle my dad's shoulder is shit right now :/)But i won't without permission XD(you just need to tell me what type of beat the gitar and my voice should be XD...i know i have a good voice because my mom says i do(she used to be VERY good so good she could become a singer id she wanted to :D)but i don't really see it but i'm seeing it better because i sing to my favorite songs everyday so it's like my training and my voice is becoming better and not as cracky or wavery and i can hit higher and lower tones and some other tones better)but still loved the song XD and the fanfic!3 :3

This story was beautiful and so was that song! I liked it, I REALLY like it!

I really like that! will u write more?

...wow. .w. That's an INCREDIBLY lovely song. It may not be typical and I can't imagine it being some sort of pop rock song or something, but accoustic would definately work. .w. And the ending was simple; the end of the whole oneshot, I mean. Brilliant. :)

Omfg, that was so freaking cute! When I read the song o was singing how I thought it would sound, and I LOVED IT!

that song is beautiful! i wish i could play the guitar so i could put it to music but that doesnt matter, i loved the song and the entire story!

Awwws. I love this story 3

That Was Sweet! Great Job! XD D 3 ] D

this was really cute.

that's good, i love yy x y !

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I loved that!

And the song was beautiful! I'm not musically talented in the least. In fact, I can't even write in meter. HA! Damn you, Shakespeare, why must I love you?

Anyway... the song was beautiful, the fic was beautiful... except, I don't think it needed to end in the beginning of them having sex, but that's just me.

Umbrae Calamitas

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You mean hard in his chest

that was so cute and the song was absolutely beautiful! keep up the good writting, i love your stories!