EK that song is always with suicide...I LOVETHIS STORY and I think the suicied bit was rather realalistic I STILL LOVE THE POV!

EK I LOVE IT! I LOVE THE POV AND I LOVE THE PLOT IT IS AWESOM!
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I'm in love. Simple as that. You somehow manage to make one really understand Minerva in the matter of two chapters - the way you describe her and her situation seems so fitting for Minerva McGonagall.
Though the way you had Dippet and Dumbledore speak seemed unlikely. To me it didn't feel appropriate considering the characters that were speaking, and the year. It had to be some where in the 1940-1950 right? To me it didn't fit in with the rest of the story and they way you've written it. It doesn't 'flow'.

All in all, I'm looking forward to an update :]

Wow, this is extremely sad but I like it a lot!! It's amazing!! And of course, it's about Min so it's even better.

-Rayne

Wow, that was really well written, I couldn't stop reading and you really seemed to get into McGonagall's character. It was very sad as I found out about her past and how difficult it was! Excellent fanfic over all :D

I can actually say I enjoyed this chapter. It wasn't so much that Minerva came back from the breach, but rather she had time to be that little girl and be loved, perhaps not as she would have liked, but she was loved. Dear Albus, do we find out how he knew to go looking for Minerva in the second part of the fic? I love how easily she lives and manages to be with him, and I loved that hot chocolate is a cure for all ills. Well done, and thank you!

xxStellaxx

I don't really know what to say. You seem to write Minerva very easily, though I've never looked at her in this light before. The way Albus came looking for her, and found her made me heart lift a little, so thank you for that. I think it all makes a good fic, and certainly explores her character, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

xxStellaxx

Oh this is cruel. I understand the Hat and I know that it's right, but to break Minerva's heart like that... a great chapter, as you no doubt know, and I hope the new version is up soon!

xxStellaxx

Fics like this always leave me conflicted. I hate them because Minerva suffers for no other reason than human vice, but at the same time, I know that it will work out hopefully to some degree, that it will be better. I am looking forward to reading the other chapters you've already posted, and I will say now you have an amazing talent.

xxStellaxx

Well it wasn't the tweezer torture I was hoping for, but dementors aren't all that friendly, either. So long as He's dead. . . and rotting.

Great chapter, too. I am insanely jealous of your awesome writing skills.

I hope you're able to update soon!

ChipmonkOnSpeed

Wow! This is a very powerful and emotional story. I had tears in my eyes several times while reading it. I'm glad that she got away from the evil Malachi and Albus is just adorable in this story. Fantastically well written and I look forward to your next update!

Yay, you updated. It looks great, I can't wait for more.

Truly

would you please update soon this story is pretty incredible

Very very good...and scary at some points. I love the way you described McGonagall's life before and I think you did her POV very very good. Awesome job and please update soon! This is going in my favs!!

Oh that's mean! To end right there!
I like the fact that the four friends were sorted into different houses. Hooch in Slytherin has never occured to me before.
Looking forward to reading more!