"For the death of Simon and Piggy. For everything that that evil boy has done and for the evil we all were forced into."

REPETITION of THAT, it came up on spell check when I copied it for my own english essay. Cheers mate , got an A*

FUCK YOU !

Amethyst Soul, you haven't written this in the style that Golding himself would have. Take a minute to paused and just describe the fantastic views. Your writing will flourish

That was a great story!

HONESTLY, I prefer THIS ending than the one in the book! Yay!

I really enjoyed this final chapter. (: I feel like you really thought about what the characters would do.

I actually found your pen name on LJ, thought I would check your stories out. Always been a Lord of the Flies fan, and enjoyed your version of the end. You seemed to be able to capture the authors original way of explaining things. It's a very interesting way of writing and I think you got pretty close. Keep up the good work!

You did a great job on this.

It's great! It gives closure to the story, and it seems very true to Golding's characters.

. VERY good. Wow. I'm impressed. More? :)

;_; *sniff* Wow...that was great...it was so powerful. You're an excellent author! ;_;

I was to lazy to log in...sorry...

This was a really good story. There's so much truth in the ending. I liked it a lot. I like your wroting style also. You have a good way of sescribing things.

...*sob!* Oh... my poor Jack... but anyway. n.n That was great! Hope to see more in the future. Just... don't kill Jack, 'kay? I'd appreciate it much. _

The conversations between Ralph and the twins is excellent, although Jack's phrasing is a little modern and american. This is a nice exploration of the ending ...but I liked the original one :-) Waiting for partIII finite

strange, interesting. i like the way the officers and ship don't seem to matter much, they're just a stage for an awfully incomplete story. thanks. waiting for part 3.