this is beautiful!

Wonderful read! Thank you. :)

How very very quaint and cute.

Oh Melodrama, I do love your stories so. This one I have not seen before, and seeing the AU in the description I might otherwise not have read it, however, I am glad I did. Usually I don't like AU fics, but this one satisfied, I read it because it was you who wrote it. And can I just say, do men really get this way about women sometimes, I mean, more than superficial interest? I'm sure they do, they're just dispiriting sometimes, you know? Ha, anyways, another wonderful fic Melodrama, and it was only one chapter long! I always hope there are more, so keep them coming!
P.S. On a constructive note, does Heero always have to be quite so uncouth? Poor guy, he just had a rough life, right?

Love it Can't wait to read Part 2 if there is 1 & there shuld be 1 it gives me the feeling of unfulfeelment.

Sorry for bad typing skills.
Prinus2021

Wow. Just... wow. =] Simply wonderfully cute.

I read this over at Blissful Ignorance, but I wanted to review and fave over here. I have to say, I haven't been this affected by a piece of writing in ages. I just loved this story! Keep up the great writing! And over at B.I someone said that they thought it should be published, and I totally agree! If it ever is published I would love to buy a copy.

i love this story so much!
one of (if not the) best one-shot AU!

its great how the characters are developed just enough so that we can follow the AU story line, but are still in character from GW.

i love it!

fantastic

I love it! I saw this on practically everyone's favorites list and I decided to finally read it, and I love it! It's going on MY favorites list now lol.

That was adorable. Loved it. Thank you. ^_^

I love this story its sweet without being sappy.

Please update soon!
This reminds me of a film I saw with Robert De Niro and Merly Streep. They first met in a bookstore and saw each other on the train about a year later and they took the train together for awhile before they started an affair- or at least tried to... even though both were married to other people...
Update! Update! Update!

This is so beautiful. I don't even have words to describe it, but I love this story. It's so exquisite and wonderfully written, it could easily be a published short story. If I was a publisher, I would snatch you up. I'm studying to be one, so once I'm a professional you should send me more stories. ^_^ I'd love to see you in print.

This story is delicious!

I absolutely loved it. It is truly nice to read a well written AU about your two favorite characters and in the end, smile. I think the plot is ingenious and creative, like the opening to a movie, and couldn’t rest my eyes elsewhere until I read every line you wrote. And I must say, though mildly sad for Trowa’s… err… loss, that you have described Heero as incredibly charming, if not only because of his “tall, dark and handsome” looks, than for his subtle arrogance that wins Relena over in the end.

This story’s great. I loved it. And, I am wishing, with fingers crossed, that you might attempt a sequel? After all, he still has to convince her that he can cook… ^_^ Happy writing!