Reviews for Tomb of Athena

Reviews For: Tomb of Athena

verse1991 2006-08-04 ch 3,	abuseSo are you just gonna leave it here or what? That's kind of mean y'know. Just to leave your readers hanging. Gosh.
darkfinder 2006-07-21 ch 3,	abusereally well done . helo could ly to protect SHARON say he threaten to kill the baby if she did not help him in hopes of protecting her . then again she is to import to risk harming . can't wait to see what happens next . really hope this last long time seems real cool .
darkfinder 2006-07-21 ch 2,	abusewell looks like you know what your doing . they always wanted to have fight at the tomb was cut due to budget so far this good .
darkfinder 2006-07-21 ch 1,	abusevery cool make more sence than the show at least most this . lee part not sure .
Silwyna 2006-07-21 ch 3,	abuseNo, you killed Lee? Please tell me the Cylons come up with a way to safe him ... Adama would never forgive himself if he'd lose his son like this.
JAT.NJ 2006-07-21 ch 3,	abuseI tried to review this yesterday but wouldn't let me sign in. Another exciting chapter..but uh...Lee's not dead right? Don't do that to me..I mean Adama and Kara. :)
TurboNerd 2006-07-20 ch 3,	abuseAH! You killed Lee! WHA! No, I'm kiding - I don't care. Muwhahaha! Ok, now that's over - you may want to take a good read back over this, you had a few spelling and grammar errors - other than that great chapter, except for the fact that it's microscopic! No, I liked it really, I'm enjoying this story a lot. Can't wait for the next chapter!
verse1991 2006-07-16 ch 1,	abuseHey, um, so i know this is really trivial and stuff. But if you continue this (which i hope you do by the way), is there any chance you could paragraph it better? Your plot's good, your grammar's good except for a couple names that anyone could mess up. But i kept getting a little confused, not knowing at first where i was and whose point of view the section was from. Maybe if you could double space between paragraphs when you're changing settings and POV's and stuff. I'm sorry I'm being anal, just thought I'd make a suggestion. P.S. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the story. It's great and i want to hear more.
Silwyna 2006-07-16 ch 2,	abuseThis is great. I like the idea that Adama doesn't forgive Lee, but is more than willing to forgive Kara and the President. I wonder what he will do when he finds out Lee is injured and captured. I think he is already beginning to forgive him, he's just too stubborn to show it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, don't wait too long with posting please :)
JAT.NJ 2006-07-13 ch 2,	abuseAn exciting start. Lee's rejected by his Kara and his father and now he's captured by the cylons. I'm looking forward to see what happens next.
TurboNerd 2006-07-13 ch 2,	abuseI like this idea it's very interesting - I hope you don't leave us hanging! A few things: in chapter one, Zerrik should be Zarek. in chapter two Shannon should be Sharon, also the arrow was placed in the statue of Saggitarius. I also noticed that you changed the dialogue inside the tomb - did you mean to make it different from the episode? I like the idea and look forward to more chapters.
moira4eku 2006-07-13 ch 2,	abuseI loved your second chapter as well, but am very anxious about Lee! I'm hoping Adama and Kara can save him. I would hate to see him die. I don't think Bill would ever recover from his death especially the way he is feeling now!
moira4eku 2006-07-13 ch 1,	abuseOh my god, you are not going to leave us hanging here, are you? Lee felt pain in his side could mean he is only injured, right? Please have someone rescue him (a little more angst for Lee before that would be ok!). I really love the fic, so please continue on with it!

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