Wow! This story was a joy to read, i loved it so much. Myla and Timon seem like a cute couple. I'm adding this story to my faves. ^^ Althouhg there are two things I just needed to point out, the ending felt a little rushed and the word 'said' was used too much. Besides that the story seems like it was dipped in a sizzling pot of awesomesause and then served on a golden platter. It was utter genious. ^^

Oh wow, I really enjoyed this story!! I read the whole thing, and I really liked it!
Your character of Myla was nice to get to know right along with Timon getting to know her. I'm glad you included Uncle Max, that's rare to see that character in a fanfic. You had everyone in character, this story was great! You can bet I'll be reading more of your stories very soon! Keep up the great work!

Well, I finally found some time to read this story. Good work. I kinda wanted to slap Timon at the end of chapter 9, but I'm glad he finally came to his senses. I think I can picture the Lion King 2 & 1/2 going something like this, if they ever made it.

this is really good! i like it! ^.^

~hebi
{ashley}

Aw very sweet ending, I liked how Timon wants to tell Simba everything just so he won't feel as embarrassed and I am glad he worked it out with Myla, those two deserve each other. And congrats on finishing this story it takes a lot of effort to work on a story that you enjoy doing, I just wish you would have gotten more reviews, oh well one of these days just wait and see.
Well Merry Christmas, see you here or at Deviant art which ever comes first.
Keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

Hey!
Just thought I'd let you know that I really really really LOVED your story. The whole thing! I also like how in the last chapter it kind of reconnects with the lion king movie plots :)
Hope you continue to write wonderful stories such as this and have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!!

Be proud, it's quite an accomplishment! X3 Glad I could be there to help, even if it was simply reviewing the chapters before you put them up. Though I've said my praises in my email I want to say again that I think you did a good job with this fic. You worked ** it and were very careful in keeping everyone in character.

Hope you have a very Merry Christmas :D and look forward to your next projects!

Aw Poor Myla, Timon really does not know how to show love doesn't he. I hope Timon can find it in his heart to know how much she cares about her. This was a very nice chapter. Well I hope to see more soon so keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

It's good to see this fanfic getting some reviews :) you deserve it. I think you are doing well with it too! I like the whole backstory for Uncle Max and how it affects Timon.

And I like Myla's development. She is difficult at first and always conflicting with Timon which is fun, but its nice to see her slowly change and get a look at her soft side. And her confession was unique too. Seeing as the two characters aren't really the mushy sort, I can imagine she would have a difficult time blurting things out. And of course what Timon did was very...Timon-ish. The dumb jerk! XD

Looking forward to reading what will happen next! I wish you luck!

Your friend,
Maudiebeans

Oh dear poor Myla. i hope he chases after her!

WHAT!?! and again i say WHAT!?! this better be a happy ending!lol

Hi,
I'm glad you put Zazu in the chapter. I like it when many of the origional characters are used and it was funny why he left.
I hope Ma and Max can stop arguing soon. I like how you gave max a history of being against love as it is different as most people uaually make him a widower but this does make some of timons personality make sense :)

Ha! I liked how Pumbaa forgot Zazu's name, it made me chuckle a little. This chapter was a little slow but thats okay, you probably have something big planned soon. Well hope you update soon and keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

Hi,
Sorry i haven't reviewed in ages!!
I am enjoying this story immensly :) I don't always like romances with OCs but I certainly enjoy this one :) I always thought if Timon ever had a girlfriend she would have to be as stubborn as he is ha ha.
Can't wait for next update

I liked this chapter, even though the plot didn't advance that much. But you get an A just for giving me the mental image of Max going cliff diving. Hehehe! You did a pretty good job writing Max, except I don't think he would say "hang out." Only young people say that. ;) But anyway, I think this chapter was a lot better than one before it.