| Reviews for Not Quite Fate |
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pigckle8 1/20/13 . chapter 37Wow. Beautiful story. I absolutely loved it. I stayed up all night finishing this! I love the Draco and Ginny dynamic, and I love Nott's role in this whole affair. I love that he was actually kind of good, even though I already suspected it. Thank you for writing such a great story. I highly enjoyed it :) You are a fantastic writer! |
x.Janele.x 9/4/12 . chapter 37Wow! I absolutely loved this! Thank you for such an amazing journey. I adored your original characters, and I think their stories ended just as perfectly as Draco and Ginny's. I loved the time it took for their relationship to develop, it was slow and steady, just as it should be. I hate those stories where within two chapters they're already interested in each other. It's a shame that you won't be writing any more novel length stories, but if you have any original work or anything, you should post it online and let me know the link! I'll check out your profile too just in case. :) |
avalzy 7/15/12 . chapter 37wow... i loved it. good luck in your endevour. |
avalzy 7/15/12 . chapter 31OMG... I loved this chapter! |
avalzy 7/15/12 . chapter 27But you did," he mumbled, brushing back a strand of her hair. "With those beautiful dark eyes and that damned naïve smile, you begged me to help." He pressed a finger over her lips. "When you looked at me like I wasn't either a monster or a bag of Galleons, you were getting down on you knees and asking me to defend you. When you made me feel again, you demanded it." He smiled ironically. "And the whole bloody time you were clueless about it." "And I couldn't say no," he whispered. "Lord knows I tried, but I was just too weak, and you were too, too strong…" Wow that was nuthing but peerfect. It was the perfect way for him to tell her. it made me feel tings... alot of things I have no words ... it was the perfect combination between romantic and sexy... just PERFECT. |
semperadreamer 5/6/12 . chapter 37Brilliant plot and amazing characterization. I loved how you made the story progress, telling it from different points of view. But, above all, I was so very thrilled by your description of Slythering behaviour and their way of thinking. I grow attached to your OCs, particulary Nott, and even if Pierce was evil I was sad for his departure. However, Great job! |
Fire's Shadow123 3/15/12 . chapter 37I absoultely LOVED IT! The development of their feelings was fantastic, the plot was fantastic, EVERYTHING was fantatstic! I really really really loved it! |
Amatorieus 1/11/12 . chapter 37Absolutely loved it |
FlyingMonkeys11 1/1/12 . chapter 1Hey! I just finished reading NQF and I have to say it was absolutely amazing! Seriously, couldn't stop reading it! So, as it has been three years, I know that you don't really need any critique or whatnot, but I have read your short stories too... Equally as amazing! The whole point of this was to inquire about your current writing status... I know in your last update of NQF you said that you were working at a newspaper and were thinking of actually writing a novel... I hope you continue with the novel ambition at least- I haven't read such good writing and plot lines in a long time. Thanks so much for the hours of escape that have kept me captivated, heartbroken, amused and wishful. I hope it all works out for you whatever you're doing now! |
Katrapolis 8/29/11 . chapter 37Loved this, your dialogue throughout the entire story was spot on and really impressive |
Tash the Mash Master 7/1/11 . chapter 37 I absolutely loved this story, it was amazing! it was really dramatic, sad at some places and really quite mushy! :) xx it was awesome! |
Never a Damsel 3/26/11 . chapter 37Heart's Cadence, This book was everything for me, I have read it so many times, and it never gets old. I fell in love with your characters. Very few things make me feel the emotion I felt while reading the fic. I laughed, i cried, I pounded my head against my desk in frustration, everything. Only a true story can make someone feel that way. This is the only Draco/Ginny I have on my favorites list, it is absolutely mesmerizing. I loved the relationship you established between Draco and Ginny. I loved the maturity in their characters, and how they helped one another on this journey they took together. I loved Draco's wryness and jaded outlook on the world, and I loved Ginny's indomitable spirit and idealism. I loved how in the end, Ginny grew more cautious and Draco's gaze softened. You language usage was great, picking the words that really made me imagine what these characters went through. This fic is absolutely brilliant and will always be a part of my favorites. |
JamieBrooks95 1/12/11 . chapter 37I have read all your stories in a matter of like 2 and a half weeks (including the one-shots) and I honestly have to say you are an A-M-A-Z-I-N-G writer :)... This story gave me a whole new outlook on Nott, and in Misconceptions I LOVED Blaise. :P Anyway I think your awesome xD -xox Jamie |
caraisabella 1/4/11 . chapter 21I was gonna review at the end of the story but after this chapter I couldn't help myself! That was such a good ending! It gave me goosebumps! And pierces character is really interesting :) Fantastic job :) |
Mallie 12/8/10 . chapter 37 Awesome story. |