aw very cute I want to look for dew sprites
moutain dew mixed with sprite zero
as you can tell Im thirsty
awesome story though

I really enjoyed reading this. You portrayed Draco and Luna very close to how they are in canon. I like how vulnerable and scared Draco was here. His many flaws are, strangely enough, one of the main reasons why he is my favorite character in the books. You handled them with blunt honesty, which I greatly respect. Yet, you still managed to make him sympathetic. You described his inner and social conflicts after the war just as I would imagine them. Since this was written in Draco's P.O.V., it was harder to get a feel for Luna's thoughts, but her dialouge and behaviorisms were perfect.

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amazing!
continue .. please!!

Gosh, i love this. i absolutely do!

I think you did a lovely job on this.
Rowling had a great opportunity to make Draco more three dimensional, but after giving him such a big role in six, he was left unfinished in seven.
It's very interesting to see others takes on him post series.

Ahh...Luna's so sweet. I like it how you started off the story. Update soon.

I liked this story. I hope you write more like it!

You never cease to amaze me with your writing. Your introspection and character dipiction was on the mark (as always) and it was a thoughtful piece overall. Excellent job. I look forward to reading more Harry Potter fics by you in the future.

Eraya

I'm going to step up and say this: Reading your version of Draco's character was like a breath of fresh air. Probably because it wasn't a "version" and was simply Draco as J.K.R. intended. He's not a suave, super intelligent sex God, perfect in every way (except for his nastiness, of course--a sourness that is always somehow magically less stingingly mean and suddenly cleverly funny.) In fact, he's kind of pathetic, insecure, and fake--exactly as he is in the books (though we like him, anyway). This Draco has unattractive flaws, yet good points about him, too. (Like a real person or round character.)

Thank you for writing Draco. Also, the writing was lovely as well. I was interested the whole time I was reading this little shot, and I love Luna, so that made it even better. Good job writing Luna, too. I dare say she was perfect. I didn't see anything that didn't mesh with my impressions of her in the books.

That said, Draco and Luna's interaction was cute and, surprisingly, understandable as well as believable. I never thought of them having anything in common, but that particular angle on their fathers works and is a believable bridge between the two. Also, even if the entire world either hated or pitied Draco, I could see Luna treating him the same as she treats anyone else, so them meeting and connecting in this way was an interesting but very plausible set-up. Great job! I know I must sound analytical, but I really enjoyed it and thought this short story was cute, and I would definitely like to see more of this new fandom you're trying out! Keep up the good work and keep on writing!

What? No stunning Zapenstap Gundam Wing fic? I'll admit when I first saw the genre I thought it might be below your skills, but I was quite wrong. This is a lovely one-shot. As usual, your descriptions do so much, and your dialogue is not wordy and makes every line count.

This is a nice one-shot. It doesn't try to do to much, and it makes a nice scene. It's also good to see you working with a male perspective again, though I do love your female characters; it's is simply pleasant to see you change it up every now and then.

You use more exposition/description than Rowling; that's a good thing.

I give it two thumbs up. I always thought Draco was just a twit that needed a good smack upside the head and a look at the real world around him--not to mention a good dose of reality. Not that he really is a twisted soul. Bent, maybe, but not twisted yet.

Snape is another matter. Never liked him.

Good story. Another chapter?

Brilliant! I like how you've kept them both in character but explored new sides to them.

"Yes, well your father’s not very nice,” Luna said without the slightest hint of hesitation. “He’s a rather cold and unfeeling person, isn’t he?"

I love that bit, the way that she says what everyone else thinks is really good.

Brilliant! It is an excellent story. Really deep, you dive into the depths of Draco's personality and uncover things about him that I would never have suspected. Well Done and Keep On Writing!