Pretty obvious who it is, first reviewer ) Anyways, it's VERY nice, as always from you! Your poems are great! *grins*

This was excellent. I know that the "Goddess of the Sea" is Michiru and the firefly is Hotaru. Am I right? I loved this poem. Its language was fluid, and the line structure was very unique. I hope that you will write more like this!

That's very weird, but really good. Good job.

i have absolutely no idea who it is...but it's really good..i luv the narrative voice..it's very soft..it almost seems like a cool breeze over a calm sea..wonderful...very descriptive :)