Love this story! Kabuto's probably my favorite character in Naruto. And... man, now you're starting to get me into Naruto. -.- I mean, my friends all like it, but I've never been that enthusiastic about it since EVERYBODY loves it and there are plenty of other very good yet overlooked manga and anime that I enjoy. All that was just to say that thanks to your story, I'm starting to become interested in Naruto. So, thank you so much for writing this, and please update soon, and thank you! ^^ (Kyah, gotta love Kabuto! So sad... poor little kid...)

XD GOD!
I love it update soon please

Aw, poor Kabuto. I love this story, so please continue! You really captured Kabuto's character well.

Update Update!! Besides...the longer the chapters...and actions, the more reviews you get!

i have only head up to chapter two but this storie has taken me by interest already!! im adding u to favorites so i dont forget the name and your pen name

Great story! Please Update SOON!

I like this story. It's very interesting, but it saddens me that you haven't uploaded for a while. Please don't discontinue this! It's very good, better than alot of other Kabuto Fanfic out there. But I've also got to tell you that 1. Kabuto was adopted by the Yakushi couple, Mr. Yakushi was the head of the Medical unit, so that's where Kabuto learned how to be a medic. 2. Kabuto was put under a hipnosis spell by Sasori, who was partners with Orochimaru in the Akatsuki group, so that's where they met and Orochimaru freed him from the hipnosis, so that's why Kabuto works for him. It's not too late to add that last one in your story though, but please update SOON!

Bwahaha, awesome story so far! :D I can't wait for the next chapter, this story is AWESOME! XD I like how you connected Sasori and Kaubto like that--that definately seems like the relationship they'd have.

Update ASAP! ^^

Another great chapter! I was wondering though, when is this story taking place? For instance, how old are the other characters and everything?

While I liked this chapter, I am getting increasingly annoyed at your use of "evil". You keep using evil over and over and over that it is getting sickening. Seriously, the concept of good and evil is not a clear-cut one.
Think of Orochimaru for a second, do you think he is evil? I would suppose you do but it is just hatred for that village. That would make him a traitor to that village but what do the other villages think of him? Do they think him evil? Probably not.
Evil is a concept used mostly for something that wants to destroy everything like Kyubi but even that is debateable. The concept of good and evil is based on perception. You would think they say evil in dialouges, not usually as description.
Basically, it is freaking annoying when I keep seeing you repeat evil, evil, evil over and over and over that it pains me.

This was another great chapter. Sure, not much happens, and people may be annoyed with that, but it makes for great plot and character development. I, uh, ~cough~snuck~cough~ into your reviews for the story and noticed a guy complaining about the paragraphs being too long. As a matter of fact, I think the lenghts of the paragraphs in the last two paragraphs are perfect and easy to read. Besides, it's better to have big, controlled paragraphs than a mess from writers who don't know what they're doing (like for instance, this really crammed review! :) ). Don't be discouraged. And remember, authors of classics often use whole pages as an enormous paragraph. Also, I see that you haven't been getting much feedback either. Don't be intimidated! If it helps, I think this is one of the better stories. I mean, it's great if you have a great plot, but it's even better if you can actually develop it with great writing too. Not many authors have that skill, but it seems you do!! As long as you have the skill, then it doesn't really matter what the plot is, keep going for it!! I'll be here to root you on! (hopefully). Good luck! Yeah!!

Wow. If it were me, I would of snapped long ago. You portrayed his inner conflict and emotional struggle really well. Keep it up!

Your paragraphs are too long to read. They make my eyes hurt. Try making a new one every five to eight sentances.

Hey, this is really good. Not many people are trying to answer the unanswered questions about why Kabuto was saying those things in the hospital with Sasuke about 'standing out too much' or why he helped Hinata during the finals. I think this is a good fic to answer them with. From what it seems so far, Kabuto's going through some inner turmoil. I can't tell if he hates Konoha or if it's just a front. Anyway, please update soon. I'm really looking forward to more!