great idea, first chapter was really good, i loved the style, but it seems you got bored with it towards the end. :(
in my opinion it would have been okay to let the reader come to the conclusion on their own that the few situations were illusions, continuing the mystery from the first chapter and a half or so.
Either way, great idea, good read, i liked it :)

this is going in my favorites definately. i love this story.

Sweet story!

this was so good!

Well-written story!

Interesting scenario and very good mysterious writing although now I can see why because of the illusion. Keep up the good work and I am glad you are feeling better.

wow!! great story and ending but the a little confusing in some part but otherwise great

Surreal.

Sweet, I'm assuming this is your early work

Wow, isn't that a butterfly affect for you.

Woah, Woah, Woah.
Drama much?

*Blinks a few times.* Intresting..o.o

beautiful

The Hoshiko-bravo, bravo. I commend you on an excellent story.
The Taiyoko- yea, this story was the **.
The Tsukiko-yes, it was very interesting. i would love to read another story like this.
The Hoshiko- Somehow, while reading this story, i began reading it as though it were a poem.
The Taiyoko- i wuz confused at parts.
The Tsukiko-you are confused about everything.
The HOshiko- i believe this story is recommendation worthy.
The Tsukiko-indeed
The TAiyoko-hell yeah
The HOshiko-then we are all in agreement
The Celestial Triplets- We give your story five stars, and will try to recommend it to many others.
The TAiyoko- Hell yeah
(These are all my different schizo personallities.)
are just so weird

That was good.