I loved that story, Joker stories rock! If u wanna read mine its called Batman: Laugh It up, only 2 chapters so far but 3rd one comming soon :D

the whole story was o.k. it wasn't that good

Is the justice league part just the justice league or is it the justice league unlimited?

Great way to end a story.

well this just proves what an idiot the joker is...and how impaitient lex is, whats does he want anyway?

update soon and keep up the good work

CI

Update Soon. Keep on working on it.

Hey, i still luve your story, update soon,

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How did killer croc find the cave? it seems like Lex is playing for keeps now...eep...

this is really interesting, update soon and keep it up!

CI

You're getting better in using more descriptions. Now you have to work on creating compound sentances and paragraphs. Using too many single sentences makes the action appear jerky. This is how very good action sequences are made. Try linking up four or more action sentences for a nice paragraph.

as if nightwing will listen to his mentor...

how ** Lex knows his identity? first he disses superman and now hes after the bat...great, is this guy on a roll or what?

anyway update soon

CI

I wonder why lex is in it? I wonder...

The story's good, you just need more development in your descriptions, it helps create tension and creates more vivid images although short lines are good occasionally. The only mis characterisation is that Batman wouldn't be likely to say 'boy' anytime soon but otherwise keep up the good work.

You have a great story idea here. Think of these chapters as outlines and fill them in with more details to give more for the reader to work with. I can see you're writing your stories like you would write panels in a comic book, but just like a comic panel, you need color, ink, shadow, etc. Try replaying the action in your mind and then typing out what you see including the details like backgrounds, noise, smells, colors, etc.

great story, keep writing.. and you let anonomous?!?!?

nice job dude

i wonder who got shot...

keep up the great work!