wow...that was really good. It was emotional and suspenseful. I was really worried that she'd actually kill herself. Btw...is she an OC or an actual character from the show. Since there was no name, there'll be alot of speculation...and it'll probably drive me crazy.

As for criticism...well I don't have much to say...it was well-written...no errors that I can think of right now...although in the beginning you tended to describe the blood as "river of blood" and "crimson river" quite a few times...enough for me to notice.

Anyways, that's all for now...I hope you continue this...I'd very much like to see what she does with her life as she figures out why she exists...

So...best of luck...

Peace Out! ^_^

At first, I thought it was Temari...
...but I see the character now.

This is very good. If it continues, I'd love to see more.
(If it doesn't...well...nevermind then.)

CONTINUE! OMG! please comtinue! it is so good!

cool fic, i think Gaara should of takin her in and trained her though.

Wow that was good especially for a story with an OC... most the time I avoid them like the plague but this one was actually really good :)

I personally would love it if you wrote more for this.

Wow... thats preatty much what i can sum it up to...