|Reviews for Apparition|
| mistralle 12/21/11 . chapter 8
Oh, it was so brilliant! So intricate-woven! Argh, I'll pray for a soon update!
| softdreamer 3/23/11 . chapter 8
it's really interesting and I hope you gonna continue
| crumbs02 11/11/09 . chapter 6
i love closed eye action. keep it up!
| Escalus 11/10/09 . chapter 8
Whoah, didn't think I'd ever see an update for this one, but it does seem to have been a labour of love.
Awesome character interaction -seeing Naruto jab at Sasuke (and succeding at irking him) always pleases me :D
| Thunder-Kun 11/9/09 . chapter 8
This chapter was intense and intriguing. I can't wait for more!
| Dancing Roses and Sunny Rain 11/8/09 . chapter 8
this is so good! I cant wait for the next chapter!
| FifthDayOfMay 11/7/09 . chapter 8
Yeah, I know the feeling, you have the idea but your fingers just don't feel like writing it out. Either way this was a great chapter, some not so very subdle staring at Naruto on Sasukes part. I'm really missing Arashi though, and I can't help but wonder what Jiraiya's up to. Because god knows that as soon as Arashi figures out exactly who is blackmailing his son, he'll be all over Jiraiya to do something about it. Wheather he knows he's Narutos father or not. Also I loved Naruto oh so innocently pushing Kiba off the bed, I read that part three times and laughed each one. This whole chapter just screamed suspense! GAH! You're starting to make ME want to write something! And lately the only stories I write are in reviews! ...don't ask. XD anyway I'm rambling, like a sleep deprived loon in fact. So this chapter and all the ones before it rocked and I can't wait for the next one!
| Mad Mardigan 11/7/09 . chapter 1
Hmm... you mention Neuromancer, not a series I am familiar with. But, the terminology is similar to another series I used to read. "Shadowrun".
Other then that, it seems rather interesting. I shall have to continue with it
| Failing Mentality 11/7/09 . chapter 8
Congratulations in making it come out, then.
Ah! I seriously, dangerously, want to know about Naruto's "power." Should I call it a power? Eh, I do love your capitalization of familiar words (what was that called again?).
I'm thinking that Mr. Faceless is Orochimaru, since I remember meeting Jiraiya in the last chapter, but it could be a myriad of bad guys, right? And did Gaara show up? I'm wondering that 'cause..., well... Yeah. xD
| muumuu122 7/10/09 . chapter 7
I'm a bit lost at times but I like this anyway :)
| Fumetsu Kaji 6/15/09 . chapter 7
I just found this story and I am really enjoying it. I hope that Naruto can do some interesting things in the 'real' world too. Please update again soon!
| Failing Mentality 6/10/09 . chapter 7
I thought you had abandoned this, but I am so glad that you didn't. I had probably just jumped to conclusions. *sheepish*
I suppose that Sasuke and Neji are working for Orochimaru? Or is the "he" that is back Madara? I am thinking it would be Orochimaru since you had started this story a long time ago. However, knowing that this isn't finished, the plot is unpredictable.
Looking forward to more. Cheers!
| Narutoxaddict 5/6/09 . chapter 7
your story caught my eye a while-back, but I didn't have my own account yet, and I'm still not sure what to think about it. It's not cliched and even though I haven't read the cross-over material I can still follow along.
| Nana-Riiko 5/4/09 . chapter 7
poor dead babies. :(
but i love this story. i had been putting off reading it for a while since i'm in the middle of so many but this one is really interesting. it's cool to read a scifi naruto fic. especially a really well-written one like this. :) post more soon!
| Escalus 5/3/09 . chapter 7
I was into the third paragraph before I became moderately sure that it was Kabuto -but you have twists ahead, yes? And that embryo...what? What?
Also..."He wanted it done – well at least this chapter of the stupid huge ass thing – before the week was over, but judging by the way he was going, or not going, it was probably going to take him more than a week. Maybe two if he was lucky."
Hitting a little close to home?