y does this chapter remind me of D.Gray Man?

Is english even your first language?! WTF?!
It is very obvious to me that you either have horrible illiteracy, or you originally spoke another language.
The way you word your story absolutely screams it.
And because of that, I find it very hard to read your story, because I have to constantly re-read sentences and phrases because I am not sure what they are supposed to mean.
I hope your entire story isn't like this...

Nice story I like alot.

Bwaah! (T_T) The second part is over... sniff. I won't get to read anymore about Sfjon.. I like her, especially on this last chapter, when she yelled to a lot of wussies in the hospital, about how they were mistreating Naruto..Konoha deserve a kick in the ** just tat..
Yay!! \(^-^)/ Finally, the third part!! i'm really happy we'll get to see all of them grown up (with the hormones up to the roof, ne?)
Really, really looking forward!!
Keep it up!!

great chapter! btw, who's Kirika? plz dont get mad!

A very interesting beginning, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

where did you learn grammar, cause unless your new to the language, you have HORRIBLE grammar

So far I’m greatly enjoying your story, but am having a hard time understanding some thing’s because well… not to be insulting but your grammar could use some work. If you would permit it, I would like to beta read for you. So, if your interested pm me and I’ll get back to you as soon as I can.

Ignore my review of chapter 2. I posted it on the wrong fanfic. Sorry about that.

Well good story. I have a question, do you have a beta reader? Because there are some glaring obvious mistakes in here. Those mistakes hinder this fanfic from what it could be, namely excellent. Right now it is great, but if you fixed those errors then it would be great.

Anyways, keep up the good work, and boost up your spelling.

And "Sakura" when used to describe ninja from the "Sakura" villadge, the "s" should be capitalized.

Anyways, this fic is good from what I've seen of it, but there are far to many OCs. It hurts my head to keep track of. I think you would have done better if you had introduced them slowly instead of all at once.

Looks like you're really intent on discouriging other readers to stay away from your fic with your summaries. A summary isn't meant to pull your existing audience - your only reader - but it is meant to hook other potential readers into reading your fic. Do you really want only a few readers to enjoy all your hard backbreaking work? If not, then start putting up a proper summary that describes your entire fic, not just your latest chapter. It's so illogical, it's like spoiling the ending of a movie in front of a waiting movie audience. Who aren't even watching your movie because the synopsis they read sucked so hard.

Wow!! Great chapter! I kinda like this Kyuubi..he's a bit twisted, but that's cool! And I didn't saw that kiss coming...gross! hehe! I'm really looking forward for the last chappie!!

A little sad chapter but, somehow, a cute one too. I liked it very much. Nice twist of the original story!! Can't wait for the next one!

It would have been helpful if your summary describes the entire fic, not just the 40th chapter. You won't snag any potential new readers and your old ones are already hooked and do not need a summary for the latest update.

wow...really long chapter!! two fights, one death, really awsome jutsus... and two guys who are really stupid!! Trying to kill each other over Frigg..Can't wait for the next one!! (finally Naruto'll reappeared?!)