 Allison 2006-12-04 . chapter 1 hurry up and get the next chapter up for one thing the part i read of it was great and for two things I'M IMPATIENT! |
 x.X-Kitsune-Chan-X.x 2006-10-03 . chapter 6HOLY... stuff that... I AM SO NOT GOING EMO! MAYBE LYKE 1 DAY OR SO BUT GEEZE! DID U HAV 2 PUT IT IN UR FF? i am so gonna kill u... |
 Sanji-luver 2006-10-02 . chapter 6...you CHOSE to write about Athe and Crocodile O_o...
lol |
 Allison Peche 2006-09-29 . chapter 7 took ur time writing this one but it was still awesome and can't wait til i come along nommi |
 Thomas Drovin 2006-09-29 . chapter 7Poor Sanji! What will he and Atheus do now? They're both pretty upset about that incident but hopefully they can get over this sadness, after all they just have each other. Mr 9 and Miss Wednesday have arrived huh? I wonder if Atheus knows that they work for Crocodile? And how will this effect the Baroque Works saga?
Update soon so I can find out! Later! |
 Thomas Drovin 2006-09-29 . chapter 6Hey there welcome back! I must say Athenus had a colourful history when she came to the One Piece world. However I DON'T think Sanji will like to know that Athenus was a prostitute and that she did over Crocodile! If they run into him I get the feeling they might end up KILLING each other!
I can't wait to read the next chapter, I'll do it right now. Onwards! |
 x.X-Kitsune-Chan-X.x 2006-09-13 . chapter 5Yo nommi! Seriously now... WHEN THE HELL ARE YOU GONNA GET WAZHERNAME...? KIMI INTO THE DAMNED STORY? Hurry it up or ... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! stuff the name Tammi. change it 2 KIMI NOW! PLEASE HURRY IT UP! |
 Allison Peche 2006-08-23 . chapter 5 you rock this chapter rocks |
 Sanji-luver 2006-08-16 . chapter 5squee!! yum! fluffy goodness! lol! ^^ Update soon!! ~ |
 Thomas Drovin 2006-08-15 . chapter 5Welcome back! Old Sanji is a real lucky guy, too bad he gets so carried away prasing Athie so much! I laughed out loud when he was prasing Zoro and didn't notice! Goes to show how observant he is huh?
I wonder what Kitsune meant in that dream? They're coming, and Non-Reality awaits? That must mean something, update soon so I can find out. Later! ^_~ |
 Tammi Killua 2006-08-08 . chapter 4 Hurry it up and get Tammi in the story or Tammi shall officially get killua to come and kill you and you shall also be bashed by Tammi |
 Sanji-luver 2006-08-07 . chapter 4"Athenus and the Mugiwara Kaizoku-dan sit around the table, and Athenus lets go of something."
...is it just me ...or does that sound a little dirty...lol!! great chappie! =D |
 Allison Peche 2006-08-07 . chapter 4 GIRL that was another absolutely brilliant chapter bravo or should i say brava! XD HAHA |
 Mr. Thumbsup 2006-08-05 . chapter 4 lol, this is HILARIOUS! I noticed something, it seems like every chapter, Luffy is eating... wait for it... MEAT! |
 Thomas Drovin 2006-08-05 . chapter 4Welcome back! I see that Athenus makeover really made an impression on Sanji there! Good old Nami! I don't think I've seen Sanji so happy in my life! So in the next chapter Athenus let's go of something? What could that be I wonder? Update soon so I can see! Later! |