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| Scifi-warper 2007-05-18 ch 1,  | abuseWow. that's sad. No, seriouslly. It is really sad. I feel so bad for Madison. Interesting twist on a sister fic. |
| HermioneandMarcus 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abusePlease can you update as soon as you can please because i can not wait to read more of it. So as soon as you can please update. I really love this story and can not wait to read more of it please. |
| Feeling-so-unsure 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is good please continue. |
| Drunkenfaries2223 2006-12-24 ch 1, | abuseOh please continue i think you should like tell what happens afterwards likethey all leave and she changes or she does and comes back way different please update |
| Greenpeace420 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseYeah I was surprised when I read this cause I thought it was gonna be the same old sister story they are all the same. But I really like how this has started out. So continue please. |
| Rogue21493 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI liked your story. Please update soon. I want to know happens. |
| Doveangel1213 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abusewow this seems like a great story i really love it UD SOON!! |
| Sailor Saiyan 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abusePlease keep writing! I love this story! |
| Ophelia Hyde 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseHey Sweetie! (Sorry, that's become my greeting lately. Tell me to stop it if you want.) I'll admit that I'm not a big fan of sister fics. I did go into your story very hesitantly, expecting to be proven right that sister fics are mostly bad again. I was VERY pleasantly surprised when I continued to read. I think it was the first few lines that caught me. Madison talking about how she knew exactly what kind of underwear all the guys wore was a very original beginning and made me realize I would end up loving this story. Which I did, I fell in love with story. It wasn’t the same old plot with the same old mary-sue with just a different wig and contacts. Madison is a living, breathing girl with all the same thoughts and feelings as the rest of us. I give you major kudos for being able to do that. Not many can and those who can, can hardly do it as well and made it look so easy as you did. I know I can’t… I felt terrible for Madison throughout this entire chapter. I seriously wanted to whack each of the brothers upside the head for treating her the way they did. I can understand why they did it, but it still doesn’t make it right. Sorry, I had to rant a bit about them. It doesn’t mean that you are writing them out of character or ANYTHING, because you aren’t, not in the least. You’re too amazing to do that. *sighs* I screwed that up, didn’t I? Sorry for my mouth…I’m terrible at reviewing… I just wanted to tell you how fantastic, original, and amazing your story is and how magnificent of a writer you are. Seriously, You put me to shame. I’ll stop before I start to scare you…I have the tendency to do that a lot. Luv Ya! (Again, If you want me to stop with that…I will.) ~*Ophelia*~ |