Awsome! Great chapter! I almost expected Naziri to recieve the Triforce, but...

WOW! Great chapter, Hime. Now the title makes more sense to me...

Um, I'm going to stop now, I want to now the rest!

Yuuki

WOW! Great chapter Hime! ...Okie, my thoughts are all jumbled-up but...

I'll try my best.

Anyhoo, I'm glad that you updated this chapter, and if there wasn't a chapter after this, I would stupidly flame you for this. (Man, I'm hyper!) Great job! I love the way you made the Guerdos act. Prideful, but well-balanced (is that the right word?)

Yuuki

Link opened a can of whoop-ass and through his anger and the battle, found his love for her! Whooo! Write more. NOW.

Me again. I love the way you have wrote the Gerudo, Naz and Nabs the most. The only thing I honestly did not like in this chapter was that the goddesses seemed.. incompetant. Like Nabooru was more of a deity than them. ...And as you know, I like this more aggressive version of Link :D

Wow! Wow! and more WOW! What a treat! I just ate it up. I wish I had your patience. I have such a hard time writing chapter stories. I get bored after one chapter! But this? This was a wonderful read. I love the goddesses! I love the Sages! I love your original characters! They FEEL! That's what makes them so wonderful. You show them with feeling and emotion. It was great.

You surprised me. I was expecting Ganondorf's mistress to be Din. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest. This story is absoluty wonderful. It's very rare I find a really long one that glues me to my seat.

Lol, thanks, jade_angel. Don't worry, I'll be getting the next chapter out soon.

It's interesting that SSBM claims that the Sheik disguise is female, because the Nintendo player's guide for Ocarina of Time, which was written with help from Miyamoto-sama himself, Sheik is male. I never know what to think. ::confuzzled::

Ack! You're a meanie to leave us hanging like that.

And there's really not much to review about this chapter lest I make myself redundant. Though there's an interesting note about Zelda and Sheik. In the SSBM Sheik is called Zelda's alter ego and referred to as a she. Since it's in a game and games have more credit than a reader's speculation, Sheik is a 'she'. Though it's really funny considering all of those slash/yaoi stories out there where Sheik is a guy.

And some people even say that Sheik and Zelda are two different people. I find that a bunch of BS since they're the same person, same mind, same body, just altered. Their speech pattern is even the same. So don't take the ravings of these fanboys with sick, deluded dreams to heart. Write however you wish.

I read the whole thing! It's excellent! ..the only problem is that there are WAY too many "Ganny shows up again" fics out there... -_-

Wow, this is an incredible story. Your original characters were written wonderfully. I really don't like reading stories where the OC's have large roles to play since they usually turn out to be Mary Sues, but Naziri is one gal that I can start to like. She's not perfect, she's human and that's what makes her real and likable Continue the good work on your writing!

I never said she couldn't fight, I only stated that by making her as good as Link in terms of combat only makes Link redundant.

This is an amesome story!

I love this story :D I like the emphasis on Zelda's spunk/tomboyish side and her duty to save Hyrule - and the imagination put into the original characters. It is possible to get too carried away though. The 'fic has good verisimilitude, and is anchored in Hyrule's reality. .! Betta' finish it or I'll sic Ninja Sheikah on you!

Wow! Great part! You updated! Sorry that I didn't sign in first, too lazy _ You have great descriptions, and the chapters are well balanced (is that the right word?) You made the characters believeable, and Link talks like he should (well, in my opinion) Anyhoo, write more!

Yuuki

This is a great story! Write more and hurry! I can't wait to see what happens next!