This story had some great...stuff...what's the word? The pint is tho that I LOVE it!

WoW... I actually enjoyed this much more than the Deathly Hallows. You're ideas were extremely interesting and the story was full of surprises!

A great read!

Very nicely done story, from top to bottom. The final chapter was excellent. Thanks for a great read!

Absolutely wonderful narration. Very well developed plot and very reasonable/believable events. I normally read fanfiction when I get time but I read this straight out, reading into the wee hours of the night.

The only thing I felt is a very minor thing to point out is that the spellings took a hit into the later chapters. I completely understand as you write it tends te get difficult to balance it out but it would have been perfect. (I kinda judge quality of writing via spelling and proper use of phrases, sorry:()

Wonderful. Just wonderful. As good as JK's own. In some ways a better book 7. Great work.

I enjoyed this story. Very well plotted, and I liked the twist at the end with Harry dying. You also write very well, but I think you need a beta or more careful self-editing; there are a lot of spelling mistakes. I like the way you were able to capture different characters' voices in the dialogue, which a lot of writers have trouble with. Hope you keep writing!

Wow, this story was amazing! I loved the battle btw, way more exciting than the real one. Anyway, great job!

Now I'm not very good at leaving reviews since in all of maybe five or six years of my reading fan fiction I may have left only 6 or 8 reviews including this one. I only leave reviews when the story is AMAZING and feel that I should come out enough and says so. Plain and simple your works are masterpieces. Even from the fic legend of Gryffindor your righting was pleasing not as choppy as many first time authors are, even the good ones, I have read and watched as many authors writing talents have grown, and yet as many others have been saddened as many have grown to wonderful strengths in writing prows and yet stop writing. Yet out of 12 stories you have only not finished two, other then the one it looks like you are writing right now. the first story i ever read was elements of life many years ago lol. And I must say you are an amazing righter, every story of yours I have started reading I have finished even if things felt like they where getting to sad or to much whining from people and it was making me sick lol, and I am glad that I have.

now onto my review on the actual story lmfao. it was beautiful like all of your works i have read... (should i leave it here? nah :P but i will warn you. my reviewing skills are horrible) i must say that the part i loved most would have to be the wards and magic falling, and with that the threat of mugles finding out about magic. While i am a heavy harry hermione fan and usualy read pick my reads from the romance section not so much the action,(but i do pick from the action time to time) so they usualy have more romance i must admit that this one was nicely done and i for once was not sad with only a little bit of fluff the rest of the story was good enough to alow me not to feel left missing, that or maybe the ending is what realy helps lol.

Now that i have murdered you poor brain with my sub standard review i shall now take my leave

AN amazing story for one so young.You truly have a gift.I hope You think about pursuing that gift Sandy

overall, this is a good and interesting story.

still, there are lots of things that could be improved. it's an interesting and original plot but the details and specifics seem rushed. there are also many obvious errors showing a lack of proofreading.

one issue i had was with the collapse of all the words and the combining of magic and muggle worlds. i kind of see some vague intent with this subplot, but it doesn't have an explicit purpose, and the main story would be the same without it. it's like a separate plot that isn't handled well.

another minor issue was character development. oftentimes you say that someone has grown up, and it happens suddenly instead of showing how someone grows up over a period of time.

also, the plot was nowhere near as unpredictable as you made it out to be.

thanks and nice work.

Great cliffhanger-going off to read all your stories

This has been an absolutely fabulous read. For a story that was written at the same time as Deathly Hallows, you have several similarities in the writings - just enough different, though to let us know that alas, you are not the great and magnificent JK, and are, instead just a struggling author with amazing talent - keep writing.

I liked this story very much. The only complaint that I would voice about it, is that your relationship between Hermoine and Harry was so vague and really didn't develope at all until the final battle. It was subtle in the build and gave hints throughtout that it would happen but it wasn't a focal point. Your story was true to form and consistent with the Ginny character being a non-character, and Ron did need to grow up and did in your story. I do hope that you decide to continue to write and look forward to what you may produce next.

Geovanni Luciano

Great story

I just started reading this story. I am just happy that this story is sticking to the plot of the HP series and continuing what everyone like in it. You won't believe what I've read in other stories (gross ones which include the four founders in love affairs). I'll review after I've completed the story...and if it is not good enough be ready to face some hexes...jus kiddin...