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| Soccer-Bitch 2008-04-15 ch 18, | abuselove the story. can't wait for the next update |
| LaUrIsHa-just me 2008-01-28 ch 8, | abuseWell, I must congratulate you: you write really well. I like this story very much. Grammar and style is fantastic (which unfortunately is hard to find in FanFiction) although in chapter 8, where Anna talks to H in Spanish there are some mistakes. Some sentences simply don't make sense. I'm a native Spanish speaker, so I could help you correct it if you want. Just PM me what you were trying to say in English and I'll translate it for you. Keep up the good work! |
| demolished-soul 2007-01-09 ch 18, | abuseI loved her little accident! How long does she need to think, Flack is obviously her choice! I really enjoyed this chapter, it was nice seeing the three women have an interaction. Waiting on more! |
| chili-peppers 2007-01-01 ch 18, | abuseYey! so happy to this update! awesome chappy as always,awesome begining with Stella Anna and Lindsay, i thought it was so well written and Stella helping Lindsay out because they'd both been through the same. Great part where Anna almost falling over lol and she thought "and somewhere in Heaven, Aaron was laughing his butt off, because I am quite certain that he was the one who tripped me". lol cant wait for the next part and happy new year! |
| sparkyCSI 2007-01-01 ch 18, | abuseWhoo-Hoo! **happy dance** I was so excited when I saw that this had been updated... :D I just wish that ff's alert system was working so that I could have gotten the alert! Oh well...Great chapter. I love the forshadowing of Anna's "clumsy" moment. I can't wait for her party and some interaction with Elsie. I just love Elsie's character! Hope you had a great New Year!! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2006-12-28 ch 17, | abuseawesome story. i really enjoyed reading it. i can't wait for the next chapters. i hope that you update again soon. ^_^ |
| chili-peppers 2006-12-07 ch 17, | abuseLove this chapter! Loved how you went from anna to lindsay, great take on lindsay's past so sad awesome chapter |
| lewiscentral 2006-12-07 ch 17, | abuseomg i loved it was good and sad but keep up the good work |
| meadow567 2006-12-07 ch 17, anon. | abuseGood chapter |
| sparkyCSI 2006-12-06 ch 17, | abuseWow. That was stunning (in the good way). I love the way you switched back and forth between them. The way you treated Lindsay's past was great. (btw...on 12/13--it's the episode that is going to start to delve into her past) I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| demolished-soul 2006-12-06 ch 17, | abuseI loved your take on Lindsay's dark past. I'm dying to find out what it is in the show, and I wish they would get on with it already! I'm glad that Aaron's going to be around in spirit 'cause he was a great character. Keep up the great work! |
| Mystik225 2006-11-27 ch 16, | abuseI stayed up way way too late to read this story and Stories of the Past. Excellent excellent stories, was in tears when Aaron passed. You have a real gift for writing. Looking forward to the next update, and can totally understand real life taking over your writing time. |
| demolished-soul 2006-11-26 ch 16, | abuse*sighs* Marty is such a gentleman. I just want to cuddle him and keep him for my own. He's so understanding, and I hope Anna figures out her feelings soon. Great chapter, and love the song! |
| sparkyCSI 2006-11-25 ch 16, | abuseOK. So I read this last night, but stupid FF wouldn't let me review! First of all, I love Evanescence and I was singing along to the song when I read the lyrics. :D Second, I love drama and angst, so the drama was very cool! I like the fact that she is torn between Marty and Flack, but she is going about it in the right way by taking time away form them to see who she really wants. (Even though, I know who she ends up with. ;) ) Overall, another great chapter and I actually did a little happy dance when I saw that it was updated!! |
| chili-peppers 2006-11-24 ch 16, | abuseOh awesome chapter! Loved it! your an amazing writer love this story so far! Loved the Evanescence song. Cant wait for more! |