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Bom hasamaki
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
I've heard tons of great things about Strawberry Wine and was going to read it, but it seems you took it down? Could you repost it or link me to a place where it's up?

Thank you!
allygator16666
2009-08-22 . chapter 58
really great story...will it be finished?
lalovesleeadama
2009-07-06 . chapter 58
I love this sequel to Strawberry Wine, it's darker but so real. I enjoy how you've followed our dear pilots into the fleet and developed their relationship with each other and Kaylee and Joseph. The connection between Helo and Kara is so spot on too, even through their angst with each other. I hope you plan to continue it - it's been a few years I see- because it's definitely worthy of brining to conclusion. You'll have one more happy fan if you do! :) But really, lovely story and so well written. It would be great to see how it ends.
PerceptivexMind
2008-09-28 . chapter 58
I love this story, will there ever be more?
Aliennut
2008-08-14 . chapter 58
Fantastic sequel!
adara13
2008-06-10 . chapter 58
Aww, I love this sequel too! It’s so fun to see Kara and Lee trying to be parents…and so intriguing to see them trying to build this new life! I kind of love Joseph and his rivalry with Kaylee. Which reminds me, best name origin ever. This looks awesome so far and I can’t wait to see what happens next!
K
2008-05-29 . chapter 1
I finished Strawberry's and I have to say, I was blown away. I had to read it in one fell swoop cuz I just had to know what happened.

You nailed the characters almost perfectly, with the execption of how Kara would react to not flying. But given the trade off with Kaylee, I think Kara would survive.

Thanks, Mucho thanks.
K
ApolloShipper
2008-04-21 . chapter 58
i like this story.. has a defent twist..


are you updating still?
emejota98
2008-01-26 . chapter 57
I love, love, love your story! But I think something is wrong with my fanfiction or computer or something because the last part of chap 58 is missing for me. Do you post this story anywhere else? I have checked on my computer at home and at work and I can't get the chapter to load correctly. Help me please, I am dying to finish the adorable scene between Lee and Joseph.
Thanks!
Darthme1011
2008-01-22 . chapter 58
more soon
NicB
2007-12-19 . chapter 58
I finally got a chance to catch up with this story. I'm really loving it! This family is really coming together. Please update soon!
Gwenyth Hunter
2007-12-05 . chapter 58
Aw, I cried a little at the end. That was so good. And I love little Joseph to bits!
The Creeping Spleen
2007-12-05 . chapter 58
*Sniffle*

Well. I hope you're happy.

This chapter made me cry.

Me! 37 year old, manly man, professional grumpy bugger me!
JB twilightforever
2007-12-05 . chapter 58
wow i want to reach in and grab joseph and give him a big hug.. cant wait for update.
TamSibling
2007-12-04 . chapter 58
Oh my gods - just break my frakkin' heart why don't you? This was beautiful and painful and so well-written. I'm glad it was Lee and not Kara that Joseph confided in. I think he's going to have a harder time trusting men then women. I think his promise to be good, even to Kaylee, was beautiful and completely in tune for a child.

It makes my blood boil to think of what he's been through, but it makes me even more happy that he found Kara and Lee.
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