aw! that was cute and funny and adorable. :) thumbs up.

aw.
i seriously lovelovelove this pairing.
honestly.
they are TOO cute!


keep writing,

heyyo

aw.. that's a nice story. yay!
~ skysong
p.s. if you're actually bothering to read all my reviews, sorry i always use the same words and phrases!

Great one shot!

it's not just nerves is it?!?!?!?! hehehehehehee I just love how you portray Oliver and Katie! ! !

This was so sweet! The third to last paragraph was especially my favorite, where the miniature Katie scored while Oliver was taking a victory lap. Just wonderful! I liked how it was in Oliver's point of view, too.

would it help if i beg you to write a sequel to this unbelievably romantic beginning of a story? pleasE?

I'm not a big fan of Katie/Oliver but I do like reading about Oliver and I knew your writing wouldn't disspaoint me. I was right.
This was a very cute fic, funny and simple. I enjoyed greatly.

Buuh! Too short!!
But I like it anyway..
You should do a second part !

more! more! more! more! more! Adds to favourites...
this is brilliant, i loved how it was him moving katie the whole time, and how he calls her by her first name but not alicia or angelina.
this is a great start! i hope you update soon!
Lady Arre

very very cute. i love3 katie oliver stories. this one's great.

xo embracing

That was really good. I just started reading Oliver/Katie fics, and this was one of the best so far!

Slightly clueless Oliver makes for a better story than totally clueless Oliver... so I like this very much.

I loved it! I love everything you write though. Always so romantic. *sigh* I'm a sucker for romance!

(yes, this is going to elicit another one)

Aw! This is really sweet; and it's too short to tell for sure, but the characterizations seem ok to me.