Hehe. Dorian's so cool/cute, and I loved how Sarrin made a shocking discovery that she wasn't Dracula's only bride.

This was very good!
I love the ending.
xD
Dorian's being childish.
Nice.

Favourite's list?
Most definitely!
>:3

Very cute! I thoroughly enjoyed it and found myself laughing through almost the entire thing. The only problem I found was very slight and it was one of my own opinion. I think that the reaction of Dorian to Gica giving him her regards is a bit too fast; you might want to slow it down a bit. Perhaps emphasizing the surprise or slowing his arrival to the child in him could add some depth to his character as well as smooth out the flow of the story. Very well done, though! I think this could be a great start (or middle) to a short story :)

Natalie

Beautifully written!! I loved the fact that Dorian was so much in character and had wit and charm. I loved it. The ending was marvelous!I could see him sulking! Congratulations!

This is just so charming! And I know I wrote this to you before, but I love that way that you write Dorian. It's so humourous without losing class and very in-character. I'm glad that you decided to post this after all.^^ Has Gica seen it?