I liked it but it was over much too quick. I wish there had been more when T'Pol saw Trip for the first time in Jon's house. Good luck with your move. I just moved in Nov. I never want to move again.

I LOVE IT! That was a beautiful ending and I really enjoyed your story! Keep on writing!

Lady Jolly

Oh my god, please let Trip stop her somehow! Update soon so I can see what you are going to do!

YAY! ANOTHER CHAPTER now that answered my previous ponders now what's Trip going to do to get her back! I feel really bad for T'Pol! All the pain! I so excited for the next chapter so I do hope you will write more real soon! Keep up the great work!

Lady Jolly

THAT was MEAN! I do wonder what her reaction is going to be though, is she going to mad as hell at Tucker and Archer or she going to shed a tear? I can't wait for the next chapter so I hope you update real soon I mean REAL soon! So please write more and keep up the great work your doing a fantastic job!

Lady Jolly

Ah ha! He's alive! He's alive! Oh, I'm so happy. : ) And he's where he knows she is, even if he can't be with her. Yes, you MUST post soon! Yippee!

aw this is soo sad, Trip isn't really dead though is he? Please change what happened in that awful finale, i'm looking forward to what's going to happen next. Update soon!

NO! Trip faked his death right? And this isn't the end RIGHT? I sincerily hope it is not! I really would love to read more! So please keep up the great writing! This chapter was quite touching!

Lady Jolly

Good so far. I kind of like short chapters, at least in the beginning. Very clear and to-the-point writing style... very nice. Looking forward to more.

I really hope you continue this story it's really good! Keep going! I'm really interested in reading more of your story so please keep up the great work!

Lady Jolly

This was really good beginning. I like T'Pol's POV. I would love to see you continue with this. I think it might be called a hyperbaric chamber as well but not a 100% sure. You might know this already but there's a great site with fan fic and a bulletin board just ask someone on there I'm sure they'll know. Again, great first chap. I hope that you continue. Already added you to my author alert list :)

I liked seeing this scene from Tpol's point of view. Nice work.

A couple of suggestions:

1. Your sentence- His life had been abruptly and (crudely) cut short. (I think you want the word cruelly here.)

and

2. I don't believe the tube Trip was placed in near the end of the finale was a medical scanner. I want to say a hyperbaric chamber, but I don't believe it was that either. (But I'm sure you could find out what it was exactly with a little internet research on a S.T. Enterprise site.)

Good luck towards your future writing endeavors. :)