hope you finish the next chapter soon

I love this story .

Aww, you haven't updated this- I'm well gutted. It was promising to be a truly wonderful story, sweet and with the two wonderfullest pairings in Star Wars- even slipping past Han and Leia as ultimate best.

Well, I'll be reading on your most recent Sabe/Obi story, so count me in for the ride!

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Great story!

Really good! I loved it! Write more soon! I want to know what happens on Tatooine. And also if Anikin gets to see Padme? I can't wait to find out!

This story is wonderful. I rarely see fanfic of this quality, I hope you'll write more!

THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE

THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE

:) wow. I loved it! I even printed it so I can read it over and over D hehehehe this story is *the* best sabe/obi fic.. its long, detailed and enjoyable :) makes for excellent reading D

OMG! That was soooo AWESOME! I LOVED IT! I'm a writer myself, and I must say, I am IMPRESSED! You did a wonderful job of developing the love between Sabe and Obi-Wan, unlike many authors who tend to jump right into the romance. However, (there's always a "however" right?) it was a bit too...flowery. The vocabulary is superior, but the complexity can get tiring after a while. Other than that, the quality and writing style of this story you have produced is simply EXCELLENT! Keep writing!

it's a very good story and i really hope to read more! please hurry up with the story already!

Cool, cool, cool! Love it! You're so talented! How will I ever make MY stuff look this good *bats eyes in irritating submissive fan fashion*?

That was really,really,really good!Please write more!

OMG, this story is sooooooooooo beautiful! I was enthralled reading every inch of it, PLEASE PLEASE write MORE!

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