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| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 15,  | abuseGreat ending. There's really nothing else to say. I think I've run out of synonyms for Excellent. It's kind of interesting reading this after watching the end of season three and now the beginning of season 4. Starbuck "dieing" then coming back. It's an interesting comparison. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 14, | abuseExcellent. He finally got some memory back if not all of it. Woot. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 13, | abuseThis chapter was really well done. Great summary of The entire Lee/Kara relationship up to that point. I just think you should have added a few sentences about the whole Pegasus/resurrection ship thing. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 12, | abuseI love Helo in this chapter. Waytago Helo. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 11, | abuseNo. Poor Kara. She only has herself to blame. True to character though. I don't think Kara would have told him. It would have been totally out of character for her to do such a rational thing. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 8, | abuseStill grinning like an idiot. great work. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 6, | abuseExcellent. wonderful. I liked the comparison between the false people and the dream people. It's a good idea that he would stop thinking of them as people he used to know, only dreams that he has. Good work. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 5, | abuseYeah! I knew you'd bring him back. Now you've got me grinning like an idiot. hope your happy now. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 4, | abuseEvery chapter is awesome so far. The whole picture thing nearly had me in tears. wow. There is just nothing I can say to describe how great this story is. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseWow. Excellent writing. nice call back on the last line. Lee's comment from Scar certainly has different meaning here. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 2, | abuseWow. This story packs a good punch every chapter. congrats. |
| Kitty Invictus 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseOh My Gods. This is one of the best first chapters ever. I didn't see it coming. Dude. you rock. Well. I think now I have to read the rest of the story. |
| ApolloShipper 2008-05-07 ch 15, | abusenice |
| ApolloShipper 2008-05-07 ch 5, | abuseat first i didnt want to read it.. i give all long story's to chapter 5. i think i am going to like this one now. :D |
| Karen 2008-02-08 ch 15, anon. | abuseyeah was great in the begining but turned out to be an angst with lee dee kara and sam. Felt bad for sam and dee, i dont know why you people disgard them like trash. you pointed out clearly both lee and starbuck are destructive and look she killed one son almost another just through her actions and least sam and dee are both genuine. |