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| narutoXsaskue 2008-08-29 ch 8,  | abuseomg you so need to write some more i mean this is so awsome |
| Sorakun4ever 2007-12-17 ch 8, | abusenext updated is...? |
| Yuku-sora-tiszuki 2007-11-09 ch 5, anon. | abuseA) please |
| kittycat3191 2007-11-06 ch 8, | abuseThis story is real good. Please update. ^.^ |
| .... 2007-10-13 ch 8, anon. | abuseAros hm, amusing |
| Theresa L'Anne 2007-07-27 ch 8, | abuseThis is interesting so far. It seems like it will get even more interesting as well. How spooky that the bolded letters spell aros, which is Sora backwards. Do update soon! I wish to know what happens next. |
| Gaara'sLuver1 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abusehm not sure if i reviewed this story already but who cares. :DD i love your story!! its awsome |
| coconut911 2007-07-02 ch 8, | abuseomg update update update please! i love this story soo much it's the very first story i read with ghosts and all (well kinda or does my fatal reality counts? o__O i dunno) well anyway you did a really good job and UPDATE! xD |
| Kichi Hisaki 2007-07-02 ch 8, | abuseThat's really creepy that the ghost thingamanjiggy was talking, and all of the bold letters put together were Sora's name spelled backwards. Creepy. Update soon! ^_^ |
| MyLittleKitsune 2007-06-20 ch 8, | abusei love the story x]] but i think the chapters r a little short but itz still great i hope u write mor soon |
| Natsuhiko 2007-06-04 ch 8, | abuseAros sounds like a badass villian's name. xD *wonders if you'll ever update this again o:* |
| Vixyfox 2007-06-02 ch 8, | abuseFINALLY! I FINALLY GOT TO READ IT! WHOOT! Well, now that I'm done with my outburst...UPDATE SOON! |
| AbnormallyWeirdPerson 2007-05-23 ch 8, | abusethe plot is good so far ^_^ but can i make some suggestions on the writing? your chapters are way too centered on dialogue. the characters are moving while they're speaking, even if it's just something small like twiddling their thumbs. you could try to incorporate that so it isn't just lines of dialogue. little 'he/she said's after a line of speaking wouldn't hurt either. your actual dialogue is fine, but try to mix up the way you present it. the paragraphs that aren't speaking lines are very short and could easily be extended to describe things. i don't think you ever described what the ice cream shop looked like or what the weather was really like or things like that in this chapter. i know that you can picture what's going on perfectly, but we're readers of text, not minds. um... i hope you aren't really touchy about this ^_^; (i know some people can be...) but like i said before, this is still a good plot, and your characterization seems to be fine, too ^_^ |
| Aros Iruk Leax 2007-05-13 ch 8, | abuseMY GOD!Cyca I apologize ten million times times two and eat my elbows if I could! TT_TT I cant believe I haven't read this in so long! I'm so sorry!>.< please forgive me! |
| blue-eyed-blond227 2007-05-01 ch 8, | abusei really like the story, keep it up! |