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Reviews For: What He Can't Have

jessspider
2007-07-05
ch 1,
abuseoh my goodness...this was so well written...i loved Ray's perspective so soo much...*a!!* have to get over this ache!
darkangelgirl262
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abusethat was really good! much better ending ;)
mrsreynolds
2007-01-30
ch 1,
abuseOK, broken record here! I may have mentioned this before once or twice, but you're bloody good at this! I mean, better than quite a few novels I've read, THAT good. You definitely do angst well, girl. Are you keeping them apart deliberately to drive us mad or do you want him for yourself? ;-)
avaleighfitzgerald
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abuseaw Poor Ray! You completely captured thatm great little fic!
Ava
Moonlight Enchantments
2006-07-16
ch 1,
abusewowsa. Great! Loved. I loved it a hell of a lot! Well done, really well written, I loved how you used bits from the episode but completely expanded on them! Loved loved loved!
Please tell me there's more, this wasn't a one-shot was it? Much as I love one-shots, this one must be expanded, coz it's so brill! Update soon, please
Misa Alucard
2006-07-15
ch 1,
abuseLovely, simply lovely I enjoyed it a lot, well I don't like the end but... it was nice... congratulations
KarismaJulian4Ever
2006-07-15
ch 1,
abuseYou write fantastic stories. I loved the last part...although it makes me so sad :( Great job and please keep writing! I'm awaiting more of your work :)
espergirl04
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseLoved it of course! You're an amazing writer and I hope to read some more of your fics soon.
theuserusername
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abusedid i comment on this already? loved it!!
Erin Allen
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseYou already know that I LOVE this, but i knew that you wouldn't mind if I said it again. lol LOVE IT! Hope to see more from you soon, hon.
~Erin
Infinite-Endings
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseI still like your version of events better, even though, as your title has indicated, Ray can't have what he wants. Thanks for the story.
Beaglicious
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseAww..sad ending, but I still liked it - I love how you do Ray/Neela. Nice job -
Neela149
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseCool story, continue soon!
Cathleen18
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuse*cough*Continue it & make Ray happy*cough*
Hehe.
:]

Love.
x
Leven
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseHallelujah, it's AshFic!

Love, love, love this. A lot. Absolutely wonderful!
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