oh my goodness...this was so well written...i loved Ray's perspective so soo much...*a!!* have to get over this ache!

that was really good! much better ending ;)

OK, broken record here! I may have mentioned this before once or twice, but you're bloody good at this! I mean, better than quite a few novels I've read, THAT good. You definitely do angst well, girl. Are you keeping them apart deliberately to drive us mad or do you want him for yourself? ;-)

aw Poor Ray! You completely captured thatm great little fic!
Ava

wowsa. Great! Loved. I loved it a hell of a lot! Well done, really well written, I loved how you used bits from the episode but completely expanded on them! Loved loved loved!
Please tell me there's more, this wasn't a one-shot was it? Much as I love one-shots, this one must be expanded, coz it's so brill! Update soon, please

Lovely, simply lovely I enjoyed it a lot, well I don't like the end but... it was nice... congratulations

You write fantastic stories. I loved the last part...although it makes me so sad :( Great job and please keep writing! I'm awaiting more of your work :)

Loved it of course! You're an amazing writer and I hope to read some more of your fics soon.

did i comment on this already? loved it!!

You already know that I LOVE this, but i knew that you wouldn't mind if I said it again. lol LOVE IT! Hope to see more from you soon, hon.
~Erin

I still like your version of events better, even though, as your title has indicated, Ray can't have what he wants. Thanks for the story.

Aww..sad ending, but I still liked it - I love how you do Ray/Neela. Nice job -

Cool story, continue soon!

*cough*Continue it & make Ray happy*cough*
Hehe.
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Love.
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Hallelujah, it's AshFic!

Love, love, love this. A lot. Absolutely wonderful!