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MikiStatic 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseI love this story! Please update soon!
razzkat 2008-02-27 ch 14,	abuseo.o I did not get an update for this...well, great chapter, crystalicios. Arg, what an ending! Oh wow, and I wonder what's going to happen between Young Link and Lola...that should be...interesting O.O! Well, great job, and definitely looking forward to what happens next!...
Royal Kenya 2008-02-18 ch 14,	abuseDun! Dun! Dun! It's like the Dark Vader scene. "Lyle, he's my older brother!" and then Young Link can go: "NO!" Ha, ha, I'm totally kidding. But wow, really epic chapter Crys. Nana saves Young Link from the ice, Young Link obvisouly Jealous of Nana, and of course Lola now knows the truth about Young Link's feelings. And yet, I don't I think I feel so bad about Lola being hurt. But oh dear, looks like she's sensitive about Lyle. I wonder what happened to him? I mean well I know he passed, but exactly how he died? Guess we'll find out next chappie. I'll see you then! Great chapter, but watch where you place your commas and you're good! See ya amiga chica! RK
Triple V 2008-02-18 ch 14,	abuseGreat chapter. Update soon.
tikitikirevenge 2008-02-18 ch 14,	abuseUm... anyway, to be totally honest I'd forgotten what was going on, and I had to skim through the couple of chapters before. The broken-ice bit felt a little out of place, but I'm not sure why. It's not like anybody was acting out of character, but it still felt weird... maybe it was how it was all talk, exposition, talk, exposition, and suddenly - bang! - help! Daytrip gone horribly wrong! ACTION SCENEZ!1 (Um, that wasn't a complaint, by the way. I guess I was just expecting Nana and Young Link to keep arguing for the next while. Or something?) Lyle as Lola's brother? I didn't guess it (though maybe I should have? in hindsight it feels like it should have been obvious). Bad Young Link. Why must you be so unintentionally cruel to everyone around you? Good chapter and all. (Would you believe I was distracted by the image of Prince Ralis taking geometry lessons for the entire chapter?)
SkylerOcon 2008-01-03 ch 13,	abuseDamn >.> Meh thinks I got to review. Good chapter. Yay for updates.
Paper Dimentio 2007-12-29 ch 13,	abuseWow, I'm not a fan of NanaxYL but this story is really good. Nana seems...angry, to say the least. I look forward to the next chapter! Can't wait to find out who this Lyle guy is.
Triple V 2007-12-29 ch 13,	abuseExcellent chapter. Update soon.
razzkat 2007-12-29 ch 13,	abuseWow...intense chapter. Nana is...scary! But awesome! I hope Young Link learns not to mess with her anymore...heh heh! Anyway, great work...update when you can!...
Kenzay 2007-12-28 ch 13,	abuseWoo hooz! Updatedness! First off, I love tough Nana :D I was all- Yeah, you go girl! You tell Young Link to butt out of yer personal life! 8D Ahh... that was a good part ^.^ Now I want to find out about this Lyle person dude >.> GAH I WANTS TO KNOW! insert random spam here Anywho, yay! Until next time! ^^ K-San
Royal Kenya 2007-12-27 ch 13,	abuseOh wow. This was very interesting. Young Link may be tough, but Nana is much tougher! I liked her fiece attitude in this chapter when she told Young Link to get out of her personal life! Whatever Lyle did to Nana must be really serious. I can't wait to know. She's hurting inside, I know it. Maybe someone will come to Nana's aide. Not Young Link I bet. I wonder if there will ever be chance for their love for each other to expand? Ha ha! Seems very slim! But probably doable! Good chapter. I saw one error: Young Link, unsatisfied with her answer nudged Nana to give a different answer. She shot him a glare and hissed under her breath, “What makes you think we’re on speaking terms? This is all YOU'RE fault!” Think you meant YOUR. But otherwise it was A-Okay Cryssie-Gurl! See you around most likely in the forums! XD! RK
Royal Kenya 2007-12-27 ch 12,	abuseHola mi Amiga Chica! I'm sorry my reviews have been so late! But I've been eagerly trying to finish up MSIY and now that that's done and posted I can read AoD! Woot! (pops part popper full of confetti and flying candy canes!) There were some parts that were really funny to me. This was one part: “Hey, Nina?” “Yeah?” Mrs. Glace asked nonchalantly, as if their little spat had never taken place. “Am “If you’re fat, I’d be dying of obesity,” That was so funny to me! Then there was another part! But darn! I cannot remember it! But I swear when I remember no matter where we're talking in a forum, in a review, or in an IM I'm going to tell you what it is! I'M DETERMINED TO REMEMBER! XD Anywho it seemed like the quest to find Lola has changed Young Link emotionally about Lola. Yes, he still loves bugging her but now he's starting to get more interested in other things about her! That's a plus! Doesn't seem his feelings for Lola are the same anymore. Seeing how he didn't want to hold her hand. I wonder how Lola will feel about all this. Then the mysterious Lyle. He means something to Nana or meant something to her? I wonder. And Young Link was getting jellie as in jealous! That was cute. Don't cut yourself short crys! That was a fine chapter! Well... IOU 1 More review! Onward towards the next chapter! (rides white stallion to the next chapter)
angel with a broken wing 2007-12-27 ch 13,	abuseThis story is very good (for a lack of better word). At first I was a tad skeptical of Y.Link/Nana, but after reading this I grew into liking it. The whole story seems well-thought out and it's equally well-written (a lot of stories on this site lack this fic's quality). Plus, the character's personalities are defined clearly and they're developing realistically. I look forward to reading more.
Saya Moonshadow 2007-12-26 ch 13,	abuseYay, you updated! :D Wow, Nana's pretty...ah...fierce XD I don't think I'd want my "worst enemy" to know personal stuff about me either though, so I guess she's justified. Well, all I can say now is that I hope you update soon!
RoyalFanatic 2007-12-26 ch 13,	abuseCrazy stuff. I think Young Link's bitting off more than he can chew though; I'd butt out buddy! O.o Nonetheless, are the italics Nana and Lyle? XD And happy whatever you celebrate in December too. New Years is here! 07 is almost gone. Crazy, man. Good chapter, and keep on going! Update!^_^

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