Nah, nah, nah!

This chap didn't suck at all. I really enjoyed it; it was a relaxing chapter and gave me a chance to see everyone taking it easy. I thought it was neat.

I'm also curious to find out who this Lyle person is.

Something must have happened to him that Nana doesn't like talking about, judging by her reaction.

And ooh! Looks like Link isn't as into Lola as he used to be.

Oh, and I just gotta tell ya, I really love Nina and Lila's characters; their conversation was funny, reminded me a lot of Nana and Lola's relationship.

Come to think of it, all your OCs are very enjoyable. Marvelous job on that, Cryss!

If this is supposed to be a filler, it's a darn good one.

-Sage

Whoo! They finally got Lola safely back home. Those were a great couple of chapters, the rescue missions were. You're really gifted inwriting action/suspense type things, and it really shows here.

L-O-V-E the Link/Nana thing that's been going on lately. Very believeable and their personalities are growing on each other really well.

BUT HECK YEAH! LOLA IS SAFE ONCE MORE, WHO! AND MAYBE LOLA, LINK, AND NANA CAN FINALLY RESOLVE THEIR SECRET DATING ISSUES!

Okay, that's enough with the caps lock. XP

Seriously though. This chapter's writing/descriptiveness was spot on.

With love for this chapter and a certain amazing authoress called Cryssie,

-Sage

"Revenge, like fried chicken, is best served cold."

Hah. My friend LOVED that quote. All Nana's talk of vengence reminded me of that saying. XP

Young Link is really juvenile, yes?

Nothing like his older self, but hey, you gotta keep the love/hate thing going strong. And you can't do that if his sweet and adorable, right?

And thanks for clearing up all those people Nana was eating lunch with; I was totally lost. I've never even HEARD of those people.

I feel like a n00b!! Har har har!

But I'm very curious as to what Nana's grand evil plan is. I guess I'll just have to read on. Suspense is a malicious tool!

By the way, totally love your version of Captain Falcon. First talking about meeting women online and now making funny jokes about hitting on a thirteen year old? Pure hilarity in my book. Nicely done.

I have a soft spot for the perves... But I'm sure you knew that. XDD

Great chapter. But no more torturing characters with that sadistic guest room, kay?

-Sage

First off, I really like the character you gave Link, (older) the caring/sensitive thing suits him well, in contrast with his younger counterpart.

And yayness! We've got a little bit of SamusMarth and Zelink. I also like the little NanaNess thing you've got going on. I know ya love your NanaY.Link, and goodness I do too, but if that doesn't work out, and the other person genuinely falls for another, like you so eloquently pointed out in the prologue; you've got a nice little thing going on between those two.

But of course Young Link has a good side; most people do. I'm interested to see more into his story, (if there is one) and that trip to Icicle Mountain sounds like oodles of fun.

And probably drama, now that I think about it.

Actually, I think I read up there in the chapters, and I guess I decided to be one of those horrid "ghost readers".

Then for whatever reason, I became unaware of these updates and when I finally learned of them, could never find a good moment to catch up on this wonderful piece of Cryssie literature. *insert sad face*

But yeah. Amazing work. But you already knew that.

Love ya,

-Sage

*bows and gravels*

PLEASE FORGIVE ME, CRYSSIE! I HAVE BEEN A HORRIBLE PERSON TO NEGLECT YOU! *gives flowers and chocolates*
NOW, TO MAKE UP FOR THIS, I WILL THOROUGHLY READ EACH CHAPTER AND GIVE A NOVEL-LENGTH REVIEW FOR EVERY ONE!

First of all, I didn't really find this chapter to be amusing like the others, and I'm postive you attended it to be that way, but I commend you on being able to change moods smoothly without making it awkward.

Also, I don't know if you've noticed, but your writing has improved dramatically since The Test. (Not that ANY of your writing during The Test was bad, but just that it's gotten much better! XP)

I liked the Lola characterization. Not Mary Sue at all. But the friendship between Nana and her seems to be strained, even though they're best friends... Hm...

But aww! Poor Linkie! Got an ICEball chucked at his face! That's gotta hurt.

The flashback was nicely done, and I am curious to know who the mystery man is!

Once again, I am so sorry for not giving you the feedback you deserve sooner. Out of all my favorite authors/friends, I have to say, I have neglected you the most, and I apologize for that.

BUT NO MORE, MY LOVE! *cue cheesy romance movie score*

ENJOY YOUR FLOWERS AND CHOCOLATES, FOR I SHALL BE BACK NEXT CHAPPIE!

CONTINUE! ;_; This is probably the bezt NanaLink fic evar. ;_;

I had discovered this while looking at all your stories (because you wrote a SaMarth, which I love =D ) and I had never read a YoungLink/Nana, so I figured I'd give it a try...

Certainly appeased my reading eye! I mean, I love how their emotions are portrayed. I really do hope you consider continuing the story =D

I'll be watching!

mrtysh

I am SO impressed- and relieved- with this fanfic! You write with what strikes me as perfect skill. And I'm only on the 1st chapter! Your prologue pleased me as well.

I used to adore this couple. This fanfic brings back memories. I'm definitely going to read it more. But I love your imagery and the way your characters are so tangible and real. They pronounce themselves well and I can become absorbed into their scenarios.

Your original character? NOT a Mary-Sue. She doesn't bother me with her being there. She's incredibly realistic. She stirs up plot. She has flaws.

Thank you so much for writing this.

nice to at least see some blood running through this story, even if it was a short chapter.

Funny thing is, what happened to you has happened to me before, a few times actually. In fact, I nearly gave up on the very first story i ever completed because of serious writers block.

just a word of advice: don't give up. even if you lose the spark to write, just try and take a small break and see if you can get it back, but don't give up. Giving up is the worst thing you can do.

Wow, if there's a more accurate portrayal of teen love anywhere on this site, I don't know where it is! I love love love Nana's personality, and her reactions to all the other characters (especially YL) are believable and funny. Omg... she and YL pulled some pretty intense pranks on each other o.0;; Grr...and Lola... I know many Lola-type girls... and this one annoys me just as much as the real ones haha (That's a good thing for the story >.<) I feel kind of bad for her though, with Lyle and all... God, that would be an awful way to go... and then YL and his half-assed reasons for asking her out -.-' How typical! XP But of course, what we're all looking forward to is seeing how the relationship between Nana and YL is gonna work out! /< Update soon, perdy please? With a cherry on top?? -puppy dog eyes-

OMG you finally updated thats so great! :3 keep it up!

I absolutely LOVE this story! It's so well written and very interesting. Not only that, but it's about my favorite characters, the Ice Climbers, and even my favorite pairing! Nana and Young/Toon Link!

I really am glad I found your story. From the beginning to now I was really immersed and amused. The back and forth childish pranks between Nana and Young Link, the history for Icicle Mountain and the family, even Lola and her OC family was really well thought out.

I hope to see this story updated soon! Excellent job! (As a side note, it really revitalized my long-since-dead muse for writing. Hopefully I'll be able to get some more chapters or new stories up)

O.O Update! There is so much mystery in this chapter!

Cool story! Please update fast!

Aww I've been waiting a while for this story could you pleaz update? Its so good...:3