Beautiful piece... too bad there will be no continuation :( You have really captured Gabriel's voice as well as Carl's and Jinette's. Really loved this piece... thanks muchly for the good read!

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Oh WOWW. That was perfect! The last few paragraphs were absolutely amazing! I loved the last line, it really summed everything up! Wonderful job!

lemme guess - Dracula? they're meant to be! *jumps up with hearts twinkling in eyes* whhe! it's fate. anyways, i like it

they are not gay

oh man was that good! I wish you could continue it...

this is a really good story. are you going to write another chapter or this is it? i hope you write more like this.

This is a rare gem indeed. Beautifully written story; it flows very smoothly, and the dialogue and descriptions are top par. I especially like the pseudo-cliffhanger ending, which added a great element of suspense and mystery. Wonderful job! I do hope you'll be writing more.