Beautiful! Absolutely fantastic little snippet on Demyx!

wow, i really loved it! demyx is probably my favorite character in KH2, and i really like what you've done with him. you're language is so incredibly expressive.

Oh, wow, this is beautifully done...

Everything from the fact that Demyx's music (not rock and roll!) only seems attractive to himself, to his awareness that the other Organization members could overpower him, to that gorgeous line where you describe his keepsakes replacing the heart he no longer has... I love this so much. You made Demyx serious without wangsting him to death, and you made Naminé perfectly gentle and understanding. Thank you, thank you, thank you. ::favorites::

This was beautifully written! It's so wonderfully to see a Demyx-centric fic that actually takes him seriously instead of treating him like a sugar-high kid.

Absolutely lovely work!

I love writing and reading one shots, so I was really happy when I read this. It's been a few days since I've seen a good one. _

Very nice how you related music with water, since it is his element. And an extra pat of the back for depicting the Organization members so well. Sometimes I fear I give them too much emotion. You, however, did a good job on that.