Beautiful. Especially the ending. It will haunt me for days.

This story is amazing. It's very true to Axel's voice and painfully true to the doomed love that is Axel and Roxas *heart* XDXD. I wish I could pick out my favorite part, but that's proving difficult. So much love for all of it ^o^.

wow... this is beautiful. it's the kind of story that makes you stop at the end and say 'aw...' excellent =)

..Wow, this was really good. Extremely well written, and I love how Axel is portrayed. :) Faving!