|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseA great story. I read this one years ago and forgot about it until now. I liked the part where they were at curch dealing with what had happened. |
| Mistreated and Forgotten 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abusei luved dis story so much i wish i was good a writer as u |
| mj0621 2006-07-22 ch 1, | abusethat's so true...Stella is Mac's sanctuary...:) |
| StarrySkies 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Very very nice. As others have mentioned, the last line was the best. And I loved the part about Stella re-learning how to laugh. Beautiful. Keep writing M/S. |
| Cyclone2 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI really liked Macs thought process here. I think you've done a admirable job of keeping him in character, as you did with Stella too. And the last line - what can I say about that except I loved it, and that it pulled the whole story together and gave it a new slant. Good job! |
| fruitbat00 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWell that was excellent. A very nice postscript for the finale. I love Mac's thoughts about the tragedies that have befallen Danny, Adien, Flack, Stella and himself. Very insightful and very Mac. He is not easy to write or to get his character on target. I think you have him spot on. The last line was perfect and so right because Stella is his sanctuary. I do hope you will write more for this show and Mac. |
| Jean 2006-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nicely done. It was well written and nicely paced. I enjoyed it. The last line definitely made me smile -- what a nice sentiment. |