Well, glad you finally got back to it. Really glad! Anyway, good chapter.

Bloody glad to see a update and a awesome one at that!

Good work!

Wispr

ARGH!

I cannot belive you have stopped at THIS POINT after SO LONG.

I'd do a more coherent review if it wasn't for the adrenaline pumping through my system at where we are here.



Kim has got to be captured and saved next chapter... I suspended my belief that there was anything left of her to save to THIS point. If she isn't saved next chapter, she's dead. Sorry, but this is getting ridiculous in the length of time.

Plus, first time I have ever said this in a KP series but HURRY RON!

It's a good thing it isn't lunch time... or I'd have lost it! Seriously! I'd forgotten how... rank and disgusting (f'ed up) this was. Kudos on the seriously gross shite of this fic... in a bad way.

16 months is a L-o-n-g time. I mean, seriously long. OK, I'll stop saying seriously, seriously.

The Mullet and Madame Director...? Yeah, I'm not touching that one. AND YOU SHOULDN'T EITHER! Just... eww. Period.

And KiBo. I LOVE KIBO! Seriously! (I lied, sue me) BUT WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE WHEN KIM IS AT HER MOST GUT CHURNINGLY GROSSEST AND MOST PSYCHOTIC, LIKE SOME DERANGED ZOMBIE EXTRA FROM LEFT 4 DEAD or DAWN OF THE DEAD!?!? Super Gross! WHY!?

You're Killin' Me, Smalls!

And yes, Bonnie is hot. Super hot. 'Bout time people recognize that fact, instead of always painting her the ** or villain. The girl has obvious demons and some serious pain eating at her insides (you've seen her sisters, am I right?). That girl needs some TLC just as much as Shego does. Bad Girls Need Love (unconditional positive regard) Too! And not just sex, that isn't love!

Unless you've got some miracle stashed up your sleeve, this won't end well. Or anywhere near "well."

Good Luck, Humbug. I haven't a clue as to how you're going to save this.

I knew it had been quite awhile since this was last updated but...sixteen months? Wow. Hadn't realized it had been that long.
Glad to see a new chapter. No, the forced KiBo was not too gratuitous. I think it was just right. Not too much and not too little with us scratching our heads over what we'd just read.
Glad to see you back with this story.

I'm so glad you finally returned to this story. I still can't wait to see ow you'll end this. i have to admit that i'm a little inpatient for the ending...but as the ever faithful reader that I am, I'm willing to wait for something good to come.

this is good but it help understand the storyline if we knew what was gonna happen heheh :)
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Aughhghg...it just ends!

This was an amazing chapter. Kudos to you.

This is the best line ever:

They weren't actually touching, but there wasn't room between them for anything except their history.

Well, and your patented 'cover me with yuck.'

I hope you update, it's really good.

Talk about being on the edge of my seat... bloody fantastic. Very impressive that you can keep the level of tension at such an steady rate without it becoming stale.

Wispr

The good guy's just can't win can they. Nasty chapter.

Wispr

Wow... talk about intense. Bloody chilling chapter... you're really doing a great job at capturing Kim's insanity.

Wispr

Oh that was nasty, how you wrote Kim in her parents home was absolutely chilling. Good work!

Wispr