love it, but where's the action? i would say to post more if and when you can! just friendly advice, & hope your writing goes well!

Um... He ASKS the kids about a .45? Interesting... okay. And uh, I don't know. But I really do like it, and I hope you update soon.

God! I really want to read on but you've stopped it when I just started to get really into it!Can't wait to read the next one!

Dude, you rock! I love that! Poor Dean... For a second there, I thought Sam was going to get really cranky!

“So. ­Anybody here ever use a .45 before?"

See, even geeks can get caught with their hands in the cookie jar… =D Sam in trouble for one, that's refreshing :) Lucky for him he has Dean. I want one too… =D And then Sammy goes and insults him… *shakes head* I was rather surprised Dean didn’t throw that back in his face saying if he didn’t use his downstairs brain every once in a while, it'd die too… =D

Oh, jesus. That is the sixth circle of hell. Sam is a bad, bad man! If my best friend (who has deemed herself the Sam to my Dean) ever did that to me, I would so either a) murder her in her sleep or b) make her life an absolute hell with endless pranking for at least a month. Just the idea of two dozen shreaking children is enough to send me running for another state. Poor Dean! That boy definitely needs a hot chick and a beer waiting for him after this.

love it

Yeah... I like the idea of entertaining children with guns... although in all fairness I was thinking more like throwing knives... tha's alwyas fun...

Hey let us know when you post the next chapter eh?

:D

sifi

Laughed out loud at the last line. Still laughing about it. Just tickled my funny bone.

Update soon!

Kat

Hey you! Me love it... giggeling along this whole thing... and loved the ending line... Heck, I started laughing when I saw a new chapter was up in my mailbox! LOL... this can only be great, so you keep on doind your greatness!
-Beist =)

Hi, this is just to let you know Chapter 2 will be credited in the Author's Note at the end of my supernatural story Net knots.

Cool, loving this story.

Please keep writing!

hope you update soon.

Yay!! Update :D Omg, you described that scene with Sam so well! I was grimacing the whole time. And Dean saving Sam, so hilarious, especially what he said, lmao. and "Yeah, that’s it Sammy. I’m ** drunk. And I didn’t just get the crap beaten out of me just to save your ** from being arrested and I’m not tired and want to catch a few winks. So I’m just going to be drunk over here and you sit over there, not being arrested.” LOL!!

:-D