post more! I really like this story, but I think that it is too much like what we already know, have You tried Making it a AU story? I am looking forward to more!

I like it even more!
There is one thing, that isn't major or anything, but Willow seems a little bit out of character, with some of the language, and the flirting is a little bit heavy. But it's still really good, in my opinion,

This looks great! I'm gonna cut the review short 'cause I'm definitely going on the next chapter...but, yeah!
By thw way, I posted a story focusing on Tara that no one has reviewed, so...if you want, you can check that out, too!

sweet opening i can't wait to read further into the story

Normally I'd be mad that you stopped there, but that's an okay place to stop. I'd like if you continued, but hey. Besides, from your lack of updating for almost a year, I don't expect it. Thank-you for not blocking Anonomous reveiws.

-Lydia

I LOVED IT! cant wait for ch 14 =)

Is it going to be any more chapters?

Woo. I love this story so far, and yay, bring on the Yoko-ity. Hopefully you'll expand on the Tara-Anya scene - I'm a big fan of Tara AND Anya, so I cherish all the scenes they have together. Will you be going into depth about the events surrounding Tara's birthday in Family too? Because I always felt that was skimmed over - the shock of being lied to, and how she could've let herself be with Willow if she thought she'd turn into a demon that'd kill her, the subsequent anger issues she'd have with her family, the fears they'd have left her with - she always seemed a bit wary of men, though Xander and Giles seem to be a good influence on her.

You don't seem to have a lot of completely original scenes, but when you write them they'd good - like the one on the hill with Tara drawing. Could you do more, rather than just expanding on canon scenes? Perhaps some humour? Haven't had a funny for a bit.

I have read every single one of your stories and they fit perfectly... I loved them and they all connected to the real episodes! I mean i know this because i have watched every episode like 9 times. i have all seven seasons. i just wish you would of continued to where Willow goes to Tara's dorm and tells her that she picked her over Oz. And i wish that you had also made up they did that night too lol not to sound all perverted or anything. just something that leads into romance and of the sort and thats about it. or what ever you chose. i just hope you continue to write on. i know you wrote these like a long time ago. but i personally think that they are very unique and in the hands of a professional! Good work!!

aw..
my heart is breaking!!

for the storie.. and also cuz i thought you forgot about us little fans...

hope you update soon!!

=D
~Angel~

aw tis sad. u should have buffy go visit faith now.

Wow, that one made me cry. Really. Which means you are doing one hell of a job writing this, write more! NOW, jkjk!
me

Little short, and it didn't really give THAT much insight onto the character's thoughts, but what you had was good, and I liked Oz showing concern. Will you have a Tara-Anya friendship? I really love those. I always wondered why none of the other Scoobies were confused about Tara just taking off like that.

You have to update soon. This story is too good for you not to. Please update as soon as you can!
me

Woohoo, update-y goodness. Chapters still too short for my liking - maybe a little more detail, more description? Insight as to what's going on in everyone's heads? Though I don't think Oz would've told Tara to watch where she was going, even if he didn't seem angry it's a bit snippy. You're not gonna make one of those clichéd villain-Ozes, are you?