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Shlandria 2008-06-07 ch 6,	abuseThis story is really good! You should keep it going!
Kapola Nuva 2008-05-02 ch 6,	abusehope you continue with this story. i look forward to it
Excel 2008-03-06 ch 6, anon.	abuseExcellent
162eRI 2008-03-03 ch 6, anon.	abuseGreat story !! I feel sorry for Ranko and Akane (because i don't like Akane*Ryoga LOL). I hope in the next chapter they will be able to see each other... As you say, the police did not follow all the rules, but it's Nerima !! Since a long time now you don't update the story (more than one year) !! A chance you will continue ? because that's really good !!
dirtyShoes 2008-02-03 ch 6,	abuseNot bad, not bad at all. And don't sweat the short chapters. It's the content that matters, not the length.
Greydon Creed 2008-02-03 ch 6,	abuseSince the one year anniversary of your last update is coming up, maybe you can surprise us with a new chapter? :) Great story, hope to see more.
CrimsonNoble 2007-11-12 ch 6,	abuseAw, man. This fics great. I'm torn between wanting to see it, Character Reconstruction, or Contrast Match finished first. They're just all that awesome. I have to be slightly skeptical of Ranma effectively abandoning martial arts, but if it's for plot purposes... Thought: Early on, Kimiko's mentioned to use excessive force, yet she's the one advocating not being so harsh with Kuno. Seems peculiar. On Kimiko: An OC that isn't stealing center stage, and isn't so impossibly perfect it hurts makes her more acceptable. Also, you write her likably. Anyway, good show, and I hope this and Character Reconstruction ain't abandoned.
dogbertcarroll 2007-11-09 ch 6,	abuseNormally we hate OCs because they are usually Mary-Sues. Your characters aren't. Nice work.
Rose1948 2007-09-29 ch 1,	abuseOh my! I just "discovered" this little gem! Please please continue! Thanks for sharing!
Asgeras 2007-07-06 ch 6,	abuseJust like with the RDF Life review I submitted, the same sentiment is true overall. Good fic, and I look forward to reading more of it. It seems like your spelling/ grammar is quite a bit better here than with RDF Life. Good job and thanks. ^^ I kinda wish Ranko would have shot Mousse :P Not too much to critique yet, and my main one comes from your most recent chapter. Having Ranko get depressed seems quite appropriate in the situation you set up. Kimiko's initial reaction is also appropriate. However, I have a very, very hard time with how the situation was shrugged off so quickly. Kimiko comes to Ranko's apartment to console her and get everything cleared up (aka, beat the secrets out of her). This is further aggravated by having Kimiko see the scars from the neko-ken. That's definitely a bit of an eye opener, especially considering Kimiko's earlier research. Instead of progress, the whole situation is just, more or less, shrugged off and Ranko just feel a bit bad the next day?...that leaves a little bit of a sour taste in my mouth. There's no way depression would be overcome so easily, especially without any kind of resolution. Well, that's enough about that... Last thing I'll state is that I sure hope you have plans on letting Ranko return to practice Anything Goes. She'll need it for dealing with Happosai (especially now that he's killing people). Thanks for the fic, and I look forward to reading more.
DeathGodGirl 2007-04-10 ch 6,	abuseThis is an awsome futurefic! I can hardly wait to read more. I love your Ranko! And Kimiko's cool. Thanks! Lilz
zaltran 2007-02-16 ch 6, anon.	abuseI just read the entire fic again from the beggining and the only fault I can find with it is that you haven't updated it with chp 7 yet...
Wonderbee31 2007-02-09 ch 6,	abuseNice section here, and looking forward to how things continue to play out for all concerned.
CRose 2007-02-09 ch 6,	abuseI'm starting to really like this fic. I'm hoping you'll bring in some of the lesser used Your Under Arrest characters at some point just to liven up the story a bit. Like Strike Man or Scooter Mama, those two would fit perfectly into this fic easily. :D
Dumbledork 2007-02-09 ch 6,	abuseNah, you don't suck. Whoever gave you that idea. I like the chapter even if it is short, but you updated quickly. Ranma kicking Kuno's a** is always nice (I hope there'll be more of that). Who's next in line for some payback?

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