You realize if he survives he's gonna feel the need to kill her and Abby right? that's no good. I like Phillipe btw :)

It makes me mad that he's so heartless! He's taking care of it for Lisa. It's all for Lisa. He doesn't even care about Abby! He still wants to kill her! He's HORRIBLE! AHH! He better care about her in the end

another thing. He hates his child and wants to kill her yet he's decided he won't abandon her or let Lisa abandon her. He's so twisted.

And then he talks about Abby's sake. Like he cares. He's so confusing! Does he care or doesn't he! *keeps ranting on how stupid Jackson is* and also he says he needs Lisa but that she's a bonus not a requirement. That boy is not right in the head!

gah jackson gives me whiplash. He doesn't care about the child, only getting his precious lisa. Then he talks about caring for it and not doing harm and how IT is his daughter. Then he talks about being a good father but not wanting to mess with her. Then he decides to name her after thinking about how much he doesn't care about IT. Then he talks about wanting to kill it and then three seconds later he promises himself he'll never abandon HER. So it goes from an IT to a HER in like 1 minute and he goes from wanting to kill to never abandon just as fast.

That boy is heartless and stupid.

Great, fitting end to a great fic :). I was hoping Jackson would just die but hey whatever suits you :D.

A very fitting ending.

"'Ever hear of retribution, Jack?' Lisa said with a smile."

I was waiting for that to come! Nicely done.

I actually changed my mind and decided that a dead Jackson would probably be better, but seeing as how you're doing a sequel to this one, I'm happy you ended it this way... off to read your new story.

Good job. :)

A great ending to a gripping story, allthough I have to admit that for me, personally, it's not as satisfying as it could have been. Lisa again thinks he's dead even though he isn't, so it's going to be another trauma for her once she finds out the truth (I saw you have started a sequel, but have yet to read it). Someone needs to take out Jackson.

You know I wanted that monster to die, but I guess two busted kneecaps is fitting. Perhaps he'll need a knee replacement? Can't wait for the sequel. I'm wondering where things are going between Lisa and Philippe, they seem to work well together.

Great chapter and it was awesome that Lisa finally fought back and didn't back down. Yes, death is too good for him. He should be made to suffer for what he did. Lisa will have a lot of recovery to do but I think she'll be the stronger for it especially with Phillippe at her side!

I don't care if it's Lisa, Philippe, or a S.W.A.T team; Jackson needs to die. It's the only way Lisa will have closure.

Very intense chapter, well written, but difficult (to say the least) subject matter. Poor, poor, poor Lisa.

I stand by my word, I want Jackson to die in this fic and I want Lisa to be the one to do it (not Phillipe). How could she ever get better knowing that Jackson is alive and plotting to get to her again and again and again? Chains and prisons have a habit of not working on the guy. I would love for Lisa to finally find some peace.

Yes, I think Jackson shouldn't just die...it would be great to see him in a max-security psych facility for the rest of his life suffering for all the pain he put her through in such a more precise way. Great idea...please update soon!

Umm...normally, I would say I would prefer Jackson beaten bloody and locked up.

But in this case, he is truly evil..and I'm thinking maybe he should die. Get the crap kicked out of him, and THEN die...yeah..that sounds about right.

He really has no redeeming qualities about him in this story.

Very sad chapter to read..poor Lisa. But nicely written.

Update soon!

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I think jackson should go to jail/mental facility ]

If there was a prize for the quickest update, you'd win!

Poor Lisa. Her soul is perishing.

Death is too good for Jackson. *shakes fist* I want Lisa to kick the crap out of him!