Wow, that was pretty good! I started reading the Recca manga recently and I love Neon

Wow... nice. Neon's character is portrayed well here. I suppose you wouldn't write about Neon's instruction with Raiha? I kinda like that pairing.

This humble person always liked how Bottou-chan writes. This humble person always likes new Chapters from Bottou-chan. Please write more chapters. This humble person is too lazy to write, and spends time reading great fanfics rather than focus on writing her own fanfics. Great fanfics like Bottou-chan's.

Ganbaremasu!

oh ...update plz!

Hey... It's good. All of it. Just wondering why it's rated R. Neon's cool. I hope it still has a next chapter. I'll read it. Bye.

Awwww...poor Neon. Ach, chapt four is quite safe what...don't see why it's R.

In any case, this one was nice.

*wails* i KNEW someone was going to write this idea out... *wails more* i should have been faster... Neon's well portrayed here... especially the monotonous (sp) life she leads (implied... right?) but i can't feel the impact/emotions very much. perhaps the ideas and concepts regarding her are a little too well-known...? i don't know, but can i request for a sequel/raiha & joker pov?

Amazing...couldn't say anything else...

i really liked the tone the fic was told. Neon really had a character in this fic! and her expertise in this kind of situation made some interesting dark humour.

i just felt that neon didn't really neeed to bed that eijosuhsajd guy..

she had him secluded and alone, she could have killed him without the bedding...

That was great ! Very dramatic and uh...great? ( why does my vocabulary always go up in smoke after reading fics likes yours? It must be something called inferiority complex)

It was nice. But the part where she and the target got to close was a little bit too much. Anywayz... is there a part 3?