Now I'm lost. The memories that are not-quite-familiar refer to Zack, I'm assuming. And they...are what the mad Mako eyes desire above all else, ordering him to guard them to the end of time even should he himself forget. But poor Cloud craves that creepy Mako green attention for himself and not for memories stolen from a friend. Yes? Or maybe not.

My brain hurts. :D

Oh my God. Gyah. This is exactly the Sephiroth/Cloud I want to read, twisted and perverse (even by my standards) and revolting if not for the glorious cacophony of -emotion-. You're so very good at this, so very skilled at wielding words to carve out beauty.

Cloud's lamb-like innocence, even as he's soiled, is so perfect a backdrop for Sephiroth's satanic, obsessive litany of desire. Neither one is really quite in control.

Lovely work. I adore how you wrote this out! ^-^ Just soo Jill Tracy.

Whoa! Beautifully creepy.

OMG! I'm already your fangirl. This's so HOT and dark and sinful and god, incredible thrilling. My hand hurt since I chewed it when I read this.

First off, wow. I read this and LOVED it, and then I was about to just go off and read something else. Then I felt guilty for not reviewing. ^^ Very nicely written, it made me stop, log in, and review XD

Well, its confusing, but deffientitly intresting. and written very well. anyways, is it yaoi? lol.

ja ne!

Cool story. I don't suppose Sephiroth's talking about remnants of Zack's personality, is he? Now I'm not so sure.

... did sephiroth have a thing with zack?... looks like it...

aww... so cloud isn't who sephiroth really want?...
please update more often!! >/

twistedly beautiful

I love the way you write. It's like a drug; I need more of it. You're writing just really stands out, like it grabs one's attention and treds it through the story.

Ignore my rambling ^^;; but I really did like this; it was very interesting.

hum, this mite sound stupid..but what was it that he has that sephiroth wants...? was it zack's memories...? ... can't quite figure out waht ..hum...

This was absolutely wonderful! I love the way you wrote in Sephiroth. I must say I'm a huge fan of stories where Cloud goes a little crazy due to the voices in his head. I hope you write more!