 goldenpaw 2009-05-22 . chapter 1aw, theyre so cute! |
 turquoise-kitsune 2008-05-30 . chapter 12OMFG! you are the god of perverts!
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i approve |
 Ryu Earth 2008-05-17 . chapter 12I totally love the story! I can't get enough of it either! and i'm really impressed with the fact that this is the first fanfic i've read where Iruka's parents weren't nice and kind! I like it because it just brings out Iruka's kindness more! =D
I hope that you get over your writer's block soon! ^^ |
 Candicehrt 2008-04-05 . chapter 12omg goodness. this is the best story ever. wow. please update soon. awesome awesome awsome |
 naruhina12345 2008-03-24 . chapter 12i really like this story. plz tell me theres gonna b more chaps! lol |
 Kuro Hatake 2008-03-18 . chapter 12*screams like a little girl* OMFG!!1 ITS UPDATED! *falls over* i cant wait to read it ^^ |
 xharuka 2008-02-23 . chapter 12mm loved ur story ;D
jus a Q, are gay marriages legal in tis? o.o
UPDATE!! |
 Atari Atagashi-Chan 2008-02-10 . chapter 12TRADITION! xD
Thanks for reviews anyone and everyone. lawls. Constructive criticism is highly appreciated. :3 |
 B-Rated 2008-02-10 . chapter 12That was not sucky. |
 Taita 2008-02-09 . chapter 12Welcome back, lol, okay, here's what I think. Yes, your writing style has matured but whoah was that lemon GRAPHIC or what! Not as in, too much detail, but as in, '**, '**','anus' etc. Usually people try to soften the scene down a little to make it seem less like a step by step gay sex manual, they usually stay away from hard language like that, or use it only occasionally. Not trying to be harsh, cause that was the only gripe I had. Loved the rest of the chapter, really liked the relationship developmemts between those two. And thought the guilty conscience that drove Sasuke to run at the slightest sex related word was freakin hilarious. Twas a good start, glad you're back. |
 DarkRavie 2008-02-08 . chapter 12Good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next! |
 Donalangelo 2008-01-20 . chapter 11 Thats was a very interesiting story. It was very well done and very. Its one of thouse storys once you start reading it you can't stop until you've finished it! |
 Komori-chan 2007-09-08 . chapter 11 Uh... I don't really know what I should say, but...
I really like this story. And I'm hoping you'll update it as soon as you can!It's well written and... uh... gives a lot of ideas... ;;>_> I really enjoyed it so far.
I believe this one is one of your best stories so far. ^.~ |
 KakaIru-IsMyWorld 2007-08-19 . chapter 11Nice story. I hope you keep updating this! It's a newer take on KakaIru and SasuNaru than I've seen, but I like it. Oh, and can I have the link for the doujinshi? I absolutely adore those!
Thx, and I'll be keeping an eye out for your next chappy! XD |
 alaine 2007-08-17 . chapter 11 yeah finally kakashi and iruka is together i cant wait for the next chapter anyway update soon its been a month |