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Reviews For: Dawn

Angel Sakura x 2006-07-30 ch 1,	abuseI can so imagine Ray's long raven hair loose... it's quite a nice thought actually. AND HILARY BRUSHED IT! That is so incredibly sweet! Sweeter than sugar. I haven't seen any HilaryRay fics, so it's nice and unusual seeing something as good as this! ^_^ ~ANJ
thiscowhatesmilk 2006-07-17 ch 1,	abuseOMG i can send review now!! And the secret was just... To press the "go" button a few more times How dumb was dat? I liked it, it was simple, clean, and cute You're fics are always like that... =D
Crystalline Angel 2006-07-17 ch 1,	abusescreams...HILARY GOT TO BRUSH RAY'S HAIR! NO FAIR!!uain..uian...I have been dreaming of that ever since I saw that Chinese spice! Anyway, great story with cool scenario and everything. P.S. Maybe you should title this story 'Ray and his temptative hair' :P
Chelseamuffin. 2006-07-16 ch 1,	abuseI Think It Was Very Cute. It's very troublesome writing like that... (I feel like Shikamaru XD) Heehee, it was sort of like a more-than-friendship-but-not-quite romance thing... yeah. Don't ask. I'm sure that by now you know better than to ask XD So yeah. Cute. Though, some of the italicized thoughts were kinda... I dunno what the word is, but... confusing. They weren't CONFUSING, I just don't know the word, so I'm saying confusing XD
Aceber 2006-07-15 ch 1,	abuseWow. This was really cool. I found some bits a bit confusing but it might be that I'm very sleepy from going to bed at 2:25 this morning. Yawn. Yeah, really good. :)
vivi314 2006-07-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseEven though I'm not fond of this pairing, somehow, you showed the subtle-ness I really like in these ficlets. Like a feather touch, this story is so light...'guess you know I loved it. =)
awakening angel 2006-07-15 ch 1, anon.	abuse...um...good, but.. i dont really get the beginning of it...
Chibi-Kari 2006-07-15 ch 1,	abusecute

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