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Beaglicious
2006-07-18 . chapter 1
Good job with the Lynn Bishop perspective. Poor girl, I oscillate between despising her and feeling incredibly sorry for her. Anyways, you did a nice job with her, her thoughts and her takes on BobbyAlex. My favorite line was "it was then he first referred to me as his "partner" but the way he paused, he almost choked on his words before continuing."
underarrest39
2006-07-18 . chapter 1
I think you did a great job writing from Bishops POV, don'y get many like that and it was interesting to see the insight of her mind. same with i can't recall a single line that was memorable either, but all in all fantastic job! :)
GraciePie
2006-07-16 . chapter 1
Because she has none! Well written; It's mean, but I liked watching those eps where B and A are all chatty in their own little way but Lynn's sitting there like wha...? You almost felt bad for her...almost. Excellent job!
Odakota Rose
2006-07-16 . chapter 1
I'm sure Bishop would've gotten a pretty good idea of just how well Bobby and Alex clicked. And that is so true, I've got a bunch of great 'Only Alex could get away with saying that' lines, where Bishop seemed quite bland..
ladybrin
2006-07-15 . chapter 1
thanks for writing this- i like these now esp. as they are showing a lot of the lynn bishop shows now on USA-but i loved the ones with Eames-still do always will- teehee
thewomanwhosoldtheworld
2006-07-15 . chapter 1
great story, one of my favorites.
The Confused One
2006-07-15 . chapter 1
Beautiful. :) I love it. That was amazing. Great work. I always like when Bishop is written as more than a one note jerk. Though, I do enjoy those too. LOL Fabulous and enjoyable piece. :)
TriStateCopFan
2006-07-15 . chapter 1
Nice piece from the Bishop POV. I think she really did envy what Bobby and Alex have.
I, too, tend to consider the "Bishop" episodes to be just that: more Bobby viewing time! It was as if she was just a body to have in the background so he'd have somebody to bounce his lines off of. LOL ...geez...for the people who think Alex plays second fiddle, Bishop was little more than a doormat.

I don't know why, but I sympathize with Bishop --must just be the memories of how it felt to be the new girl on the job. Maybe that's why in my fictions, I've portrayed her in a more favorable light.

Anyway, nice job.
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