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SkinheadB
2009-11-27 . chapter 48
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absolutely wonderful story...



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SkinheadB
2009-11-25 . chapter 13
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this was beautiful.

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RainbowOfNeedlessBeating
2009-11-05 . chapter 48
WOW. THAT WAS POSSIBLE ONE OF THE BEST THINGS I'VE EVER READ! It had like everything i like in it, it was really really well written, and you made it so interesting with all the random sub plots and a beautiful 'be grateful for the family you've got' theme, and there was all the cute bits and suggestiveness of Jack and Ennis doing things without having too much or too little description...
Yeah, it was just perfect, well done!
:)
Cheryl C
2009-10-07 . chapter 48
I thoroughly enjoyed this entire story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it.
cookie-xsawery
2009-09-22 . chapter 48
This was amazing. Really.
I've been sitting here reading for a few days now, all the time debating with my self weather or not I should read just another story. Because, I really wanted to know how the whole thing would end, but then again I really love the story and I didn't want it to end. But I must say, I've really been enjoying the time I spent reading this.
All the characters were so great, realistic - just like I picture them in my head. I think it was a great mix of romance, angst, drama, family and all that. This easily gets a spot as my favorites; because it's so well written, and I know for sure that I've been picturing every single thing you've written.
This was amazing.
nagus
2009-08-25 . chapter 48
What an incredible story! I don't know what else to say. It was beautiful, and well written. All the characters were full, complex, and layered. I love the way you slowly built the relationships, making them more realistic. The drama, the angst, the romance...it was all fantastic. I'm not a big fan of the movie, but this story has definitely won me over. Bravo! I hope, really, really hope, that there will be more to come...one day.
Anita
2009-07-10 . chapter 45
I wanted to say that this was a wonderful story. It was so good to see Jack and Ennis have a full and happy life.
You definately have talent. Write on,
Anita
Dorryen Golde
2009-05-21 . chapter 48
That was beautiful. Being able to see Jack and Ennis and their family through tough, happy, and downright awkward times was an emotionally challenging but definitely worthwhile read. I enjoyed each and every chapter of this story (though for some reason, the flashback interlude at the beach is the one that will probably stay with me forever). I only think that your epilogue (the last few lines, that is) could have ended on a stronger note, more family-based to be consistent with the rest of your story rather than Junior-and-Kurt centered. But as a whole, this work may as well be flawless.
firedraygon
2009-04-30 . chapter 48
This is such a great read. I love all the new characters and how you gave Bobby and Junior traits from their parents. The whole Nature vs. Nuture thing was integrated nicely. Very awesome work with this!!

~fd97
L.Ayoo
2009-04-22 . chapter 48
Well ,my first Brokeback fic and what a start!
You're incredible .You see I'm French and your fabulous story was such an example of simplicity to me it was as clear as water, not that I such at English...

And seriously no headache !ROFL

Beside I really love your Ennis (Ennis is a softie) and Jack they are really made to face the "mean" world together !

I love Them . I love you ! You're the best, ever ! (I'm crying right now LOL)
Joetheone
2009-03-21 . chapter 48
I read this now for the third time. Lordy lordy all I have to say is I loved this story. If you ever get the hankering for a sequel or maybe just an update on how life is going for everyone let me know. Joe
maipigen
2009-02-27 . chapter 48
Review Contains Spoilers!
Okay...

this was my first ever Brokeback Mountain fic and boy what a way to start!

I wished it would have happened like this. I love it and it's a definite favorite. I loved the way you wrote all their lovescenes without anthing too specific. Simply because I think it would have ruined the story with too much graphic smut, i like smut on't give me wrong, but it suited perfectly here.

I just wished that Samantha and bobby would have ended up together, that's all. lol I love the way you ended the story and I'm glad M.Ellen got some of her back together...

I really don't know what else to say other than you've got me hooked and I'll always remember this story and junior and Bobby and the whole dynamics you build up. At first I thought Bobby and Junior would be an item, but I liked how you concentrated on their "sibling" relationship.


Okay, I'll stop my yammering and just end this by thankingh you for posting such a wonderful piece of work!

Happy future writing
ditte mai
denmark
SnarlingDemons
2009-02-07 . chapter 48
This was an amazing fanfiction ^^

You managed to capture Jack and Ennis perfectly and it just seemed to flow. So many new characters and you integrated them into the story so well that it seemed like they were meant there. A+ three thousand times.
Bleucollar
2009-02-04 . chapter 48
Simply one of the most amazing and well done Brokeback fics I have ever read !

2009-01-24 . chapter 48
I'm gonna be an awesomely bad reviewer and just say that it was awesomeawesomeawesome and that I laughed out loud and cried and just enjoyed the heck of it, sorry for lack of detail, thank you!
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