Absolutely superb! I must admit though, I am a little jealous, because I myself have a fan fic along the same lines. It just goes to show that great minds think alike. You really have a talent for story telling and this piece probably is one of the better ones. Please, I hope you'll continue

"For every Mahatma Ghandi there are a thousand Michael Collins'."

What I like about this piece is that is it not decriptive in the normal sense...it reads as a prologue, and probably in the purest sense, it is. You show the unseen problems with breaking from the Prozium and show how--amid a world that some think NEED feelings-- human emotion can be the very thing that drives humans, being the fragile creatures they are, into a deeper madness than predicted.

I like it. It's darker, doesn't end on a happy note and yet...is probably more realistic than some of the other stories floating about here.

Way to go. Are you going to continue?

~LF

It's a cycle... Always. Isn't it?