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| bbbppphhh 2008-06-10 ch 2,  | abusegood idea! UPDATE ASAP PLEAZE! |
| ERROR809 2006-12-30 ch 2, | abuselol i can just imagine asuka yelling at shinji on the soccer pitch, anyways good story, please continue it! |
| jcmoorehead 2006-08-26 ch 2, | abuseSorry I havn't reviewed this yet, interesting chapter and quite funny aswel. Looking forward to seeing more. |
| LINKed up 2006-08-14 ch 2, | abuseWell... that was odd, to say the least. Nice chapter though. Anyways, update when you can. I saw the pictures on your live space, did you draw those yourself? Cause they are really, really good. |
| LINKed up 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseHey, I just wanted to say that, from what I have read so far, this looks like its going to be a good story. I did notice a couple things that you might want to correct, such as "It remembered me of a tampon" and when the letter mentions the ticket. Just thought you would like to know. Now, its on to the second chapter. :D |
| asukakeina 2006-08-11 ch 2, | abuseit's not bad, but there are many grammatical and spelling errors. lots of typos too. you need new pre readers. I keep wincing everytime I see a mistake (they're big ones). perhapse english is not your first language? I like how you're going with the manga. |
| BishiHarem 2006-08-10 ch 2, | abuseVery nice! You've kept me giggling. But I still stand by the belief that you're crazy, man. |
| WarShadow 2006-08-10 ch 2, | abuseOk this was a funny story to read. Can't wait to see more from you. Not much else to say I was too busy laughing my ** off at all of the sexual references.(I know I am just a perv) |
| Bardiel the 13th 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseNice story.Why were you reading doujinshi?of Kaoru gross.Ah who gives a ** you're German i'm half Italian soon we will reunite with the Japaneese and destroy all.It's all good no need to wory you'll get most of the women from the countries we take over(just kidding about the destruction and chaos or reuniting our countries)bye. |
| Frost-EVA-04 2006-08-06 ch 2, | abuseFunny as hell. The soccer team needs to get it together. Keep it up. Can't wait for the romance. Frost out. |
| Sun S. Li 2006-08-06 ch 2, | abuseThis chapter was confusing. Mostly because of the randomness. It was good but i think you should stragihten it up for the next chapter. |
| Necrokon 2006-08-06 ch 2, | abuseI liked the chapter. It was very funny, but once again I ask you that you have brief accounts of Ramiel and the Jet Alone robot and skip onto when Shinji and Asuka meet. Have some stuff about them. |
| RampagingEvangelion 2006-08-06 ch 2, | abuseYEAH! Another chapter! I saw the pic on your homepage when I was looking at your ShinjixAsuak pics. Nice story all arround. Great potential. Can't wait till Asuka gets in the picture. Thats the one bad thing about starting a fic from episode one... unless it is like Sniper-of-Death's fic where he comes back in time... well, I'm all done. Aye Aye Captain! |
| RampagingEvangelion 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseUpdate damn it! Any story that tells it how it is with Misato is a good story in my book. Pretty funny stuff! |
| 87nidsim 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseNice, I like it. Don't be too long with the next chapter, okay? |