Very well written.

I was NOT crap! You did quite well. Good story.

Hey,

I don't think it was crap at all, although maybe the death of Legolas' friend was going a bit too far... But it was fantastic nonetheless!

Luineth Maeniel

no i am not

I thought it was very well written and that the characters were well done too :-)

Not crap, I liked it. I was surprised when Aragorn asked him to show him his skills, nice job I did not see that coming, made for a good ending.

I checked out your profile-wow bad luck on all those stories. I have one story ( I have not posted it yet) I am working on right now and I worry about losing it from my computer crashing, I can not imagine losing that much work.