 Innocent KH 2009-11-28 . chapter 18"SGW is officially off hiatus.
That's right. No more hiatus. Done. There are only about five chapters to go, and I'm going to do my best to finish it by summer. No promises, but I will do my best."
Off hiatus...Lol. No Fair man, tricking us like that xD
*sniff* seriously though only 4 more chapters according to ur end note, but we are waiting as patiently as we can for them to come :D
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...Pleash update soon? Pleash? *Big Sora puppy eyes*...
u'll get FREE COOKIES and a Sora plushie by post!! Seriously u will!
( ...it's lies >.> )
aah well...laterz
*cries herself to sleep*
LOL :P
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 calmxbeforexthexstorm 2009-11-09 . chapter 18Hahaha XD This is probably about my 10th time re-reading this wonderful pice of awesomeness~! I love it.
It's so clever and fun and angsty and just BRILLIANT. Haha, and everytime either Riku or Axel say "It's 'fool-proof'" you can't help but smile and be like '...No it's not.'
But I still love them XD
Heh. But really, I adore this fic :]
You're amazing~! |
 Sightlines 2009-11-08 . chapter 19Wow. Just wow. This is one amazing story. I really hope you do decide to finish it even though it hasn't been updated in only God knows how long. Great job writing! Even if you don't decide to finish it I am glad I decided to read this far. :D |
 Natillia 2009-11-08 . chapter 19I love this catastrophe! It's like, the best romance drama thingy I've ever read!! Way better than those cheesy serialized 'dramas' on TV! I have enjoyed every single chapter of this fic and I adore it! And I'm new to Kingdom Hearts! Yes, I have heard of it, but never played the game and I've just started reading the manga chapters last week! I love every character in this fic even though I hadn't even heard of them before. I love the flow of the fic. I just, love everything about it! It's pure awesomeness! I find this fic a rare one as it is totally fabulous and is one of the best comedy fic I've ever read! Including both Chinese and English ones! Thank you! Thank you for your hard work and your brilliance! Thank you Aindel S. Druida, for betaing this awesome fic! Thank you! Both of you! |
 terracannon876 2009-11-05 . chapter 7This is the point at which I discovered this feeling, so I'll review here. Since I read most of the other parts of the story and reviewed the later chapters, won't let me review there. Anyways, I just have to say, ... you're absolutely right in that, even though things aren't perfect, sometimes things can be just beautiful. This chapter, when you look at the weird characters, the weird relationships, the horrible misunderstandings, the many faux-pas, and then you think ... "but they still work it out. and they're happy. and all is good and well in the end, after all the hard effort to keep everything together."
Man, I love these two families. Beautiful is a good adjective to describe them. I'll admit, I think my eyes got a bit blurry while reading this towards the end >_> |
 Never Freedom 2009-11-02 . chapter 19This story is so cute.
I love the humor most of all. This is definitely the funniest story I’ve ever read. You keep it from being obnoxious, and it never sounds like you’re trying too hard. But I also love all the wonderful serious angsty bits that actually make it a story and not a crackfest. Plus, everyone is in character, even with all the insanity. It’s amazing.
I also noted several allusions to Harry Potter which rounded off my confirmation that I absolutely love you.
I realized this story wasn’t finished when I began reading it, but I thought I’d take a look anyway. I was interested at the casual tone (and you did a wonderful job with that; most people don’t quite get it right), and by the first few paragraphs I knew it was a story I was going to love unquestioningly. And for the first time ever, I honestly don’t care that it’s unfinished. I would wait until the end of eternity for this story. And even then, if it never gets finished, I won’t regret reading a single word. It’s that good. And you’re that awesome. |
 Sabaku no Rebecca 2009-10-29 . chapter 19Okay. So. Here's the thing.
I don't remember if I've already reviewed this thing or not, because it's been a long time since I've last read it. And I've read it more than a few times, which is saying something, because I just don't DO that with fanfics. Only with the best. But more importantly, not only do I not reread them, but I virtually never review. Not since freshman year. I've read fics that've made me laugh, cry, and shout, and I can't pick up my lazy-** fingers and write them a single word honoring it.
But in THIS case, I just HAVE to. You see, there is a very big problem here. You may recall that the last chapter before this one, Chapter Sixteen: and it, included a fervent promise from you. You said, they /will/ get better.
Here is my problem. I was on the 17th chapter, drinking in your writing as per usual and my heart racing at the familiar rising tension, desperately sifting through my memories to recall what had happened next, when I came to the bottom of the page. I immediately flicked over my cursor to the little lavender rectangle at the bottom right. My fingers sought the satisfying 'click' of the next button. And then I realized.
There wasn't one.
So lovely Dual, one of the best writers whose fics I have ever had the misfortune to fall in love with on this site, I have one question to ask of you:
What. The F[expletive]. Do you think. You are doing.
Do you realize that you have not updated for 1 year, 3 months, and 21 days? Perhaps you are unaware as to the gravity of this situation in which we find ourselves. Let me explain it for you in small words.
Axel, Roxas, Sora, and Riku need to 1) reveal what they had Maleficent say, 2) fix everything, 3) forgive one another, and 4) have wild passionate monkey sex in the chimney and then get married in Switzerland and bribe Vexen with great homemade gay ** to invent a way for it to be scientifically possible for males to bear children and then shag each other silly until their bellies explode with teeming masses of spiky-haired, shiny-eyed, devil babies whom will henceforth multiply like bacteria and rule the human race and turn earth into something more resembling a typical anime or video game, only with a lot more sex, preferably between boys.
And none of this can occur until you finish. The goddamn. Fic.
I leave you on this note:
If you pick your lazy ** off the brimstone you've been toasting on for the last year, three months, and twenty-one days in order to continue this fic to its execution, I will, on pain of death, find a way to kidnap Sora and give him to you. I have an army that will not fail to achieve.
Think about it.
SnR |
 teddikins 2009-10-29 . chapter 19sobs/ sobs/ no you can't just leave us on this sort of cliffie...ITS CRUEL AND INJUSTIFIED
PLEASE DON'T LEAVE IT HERE!1
I WANT TO STILL BE ALIVE TO READ THE ANGRY SMEX THATS GOING TO ENSUE SO SO UPDATE!1
(poor poor riku) |
 MELTcorp91 2009-10-28 . chapter 19What did she say!?! Oh my god! You almost had me crying at the end of this chapter! Riku!!
Yay to Leon and Cloud for FINALLY shacking it up! XD
Axel's family is just plain awesome. From the way they all interat with each other to the punishments the parents always dish out!
You so so so so so have to update on this! I'm really anctious to see what happens nect! This is such an AWESOME story! |
 teddikins 2009-10-25 . chapter 4the best lines in this chapter: 'The kid was a sociopath. Axel was pretty sure he was in love.' and 'He was sharing Demyx-microbes. It was positively disgusting, and Zexion was sure he’d never been more intrigued.' (oh, zexion you creepy sob. loves/)
I LOVELOVELOVE THIS FIC!1 (is incoherent/) |
 personifyingowned 2009-10-13 . chapter 19that was amazing! XD you really have to update, or I'm going to die without you. You've done a wonderful job on everything! |
 Optimistic Pessimist 2009-10-12 . chapter 19awsome story! i laughed so hard! and there's lots of drama. keep up the good work! |
 SkyChasingDreamer 2009-10-11 . chapter 19Okay seriously, you can't leave it there! Freaking update its been over a YEAR!People need to know what'll happen you left it at such a cliffie and this is such an enticing story!! Update PLEASE!
~the dreamer |
 personifyingowned 2009-10-11 . chapter 1I was totally not capable of figuring out that it was Demyx that was speaking in the second half. I figure it was Cloud in the first, right? |
 PencilsLovePaper 2009-10-09 . chapter 19Holy **.
Just, holy ** **.
I think I might actually be sitting here crying, simply because of how amazing this story is. The plot, it flows almost flawlessly, and never, not even once, did I stop reading. I think I've spent seven hours starring at my computer screen, letting the white on black burn my eyes, because it's better for them that way. I have never read a story with more consistent voice, better style, never ever ever. Honestly, I don't know how I can type at all right now my visions so blurry This was simply a master piece of writing, a piece to top the charts. Note, Writing, not fan fiction. This is to good to be considered 'just a mere fan fiction.' No, this is a dream come true, the best distraction from the ** life's throwing me a girl could ask for. I- I thank you. I needed to hear about other people dealing with **, people that I know and love, and This amazingly realistic fan fiction, It was a 2 day belated birthday present.
The best one I've ever gotten. |
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