I just happened to discover your stories when I was searching for fan fiction involving Murdock and Amy. Great story so far! Looking forward to reading your other stories :)

Interesting story, I know it's been 9 years sense this was uploaded but I would love to see it continued.

this is a good story. keep up the good work.

Whoa great story Lots of action. :)

i'm curios!

it's real good so far!

please don't stop now!

Keep on writing and please, post another chapter soon! Its really exciting and I wished I had a hundred voices to make you continue if my own voice isnt enough!

Why aren't BA and Hannibal around?

hmm, well again a good set up but to me this part is a bit rushed. You're just pushing all the actions into one paragraph and not really giving the details the reader wants. For example, the last paragraph, I would have it much more broken down. A lot happens in that section, none of particularly bad...it just needs to be fleshed out more. It a catastrophic accident, but you lump it all together like a recipe for a casserole...

I'm going to finish reading what you've posted to see where this is going.

Ooooo! Exciting! Sorry it's taken me so long to catch up. Great chapter! I can't wait. I gotta go on to the next one. _

please continue. I can't take it if you don't finish this fascinating story. I love it! :D

this is really getting interesting, hope someone comes to help them soon and Decker doesnt' find them, can't wait to read the next part

Sarah )

One of my pet peaves is people that go: I won't write more if you dont' review. Now I liked the story but why would I want to feel pressured into reviewing the story? Write because YOU want to write. If you get reviews great. If not oh well. Deal with it. It's part of writing.